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I hope it's not just that the original Elena died somehow. The "what about the original person" question is very interesting in stories like these, but it's often dismissed by saying the person died first, leaving an empty body. I really hope this gives us something more complex and morally gray.

Even in a chapter supposedly built around the emotions the characters are feeling, it's still panel after panel of fucking OoO faces. This guy is incapable of drawing proper expression.

They didn't have to throw a "Pseudo-Harem" gag into this, but they did, and it was amazing. It goes to show how well defined the characters are that they can all be identified just from the way they speak. Not easy with such a large cast. I was also with Karane assuming we'd see a bear or similar.

Oh, we did get a epilogue after all! And it's longer than a normal chapter. I felt the magic of the heart part was rushed in chapter 299 (I feel like it would be the real climax), but I'm glad we got a lot of time afterward to see the results.

I think the initial conversation made sense and I didn't mind that we got a bunch of chapters explaining how succubi work. It was a reasonable time to establish that. I do question following that with a second reveal about the MC's past, though. It seems like that would make sense to cover in a...

Start of chapter: "how did it end up like this?!" End of chapter: "How did it end up like this?" Like, you just showed us. That's what the chapter was.

You need a sophisticated apparatus to do location sensing from sound. It's one thing to say they notice sound; it's another to say they can and would hone on on someone merely shouting, while they are flying and creating overwhelmingly intense vibrations themselves.

It's been a fun (and mostly relaxing) journey. It will be nice to be able to recommend this to people as a completed story.

I look forward to background Easter eggs during otherwise calm scenes when this gets animated.

I'm kinda glad for the credits page because I really was thinking the whole time, "was that really what she said?" And it was. I like how Gimlet just accepts it as something he expected to hear.

Thanks for the translation! This is very clear and gets everyone's emotions across well.

While I agree with this about allergic response, and found it weird that people were just saying "it wouldn't be worse" when it totally could be... The whole "shout at it" part is absurd. Wasps can detect loud vibrations via their legs and antennae (especially though a surface), but responding...

I'm kinda curious if anyone here actually still likes this story. Basically everyone is venting about how bad it is (and yet sunk cost); I'm in the same category. Is that universal? Or is there still someone out there going, "yeah, this is my jam"?

New lore: the reason login-san has considered suicide is that he doesn't know how to interact in public without embarrassment, due to having a penis so large that pants wouldn't be able to contain it, and a tongue so long that he is unable to speak properly.

How about the panel clearly illustrating how his magnum dong would punch right through the back of her head, somehow with no ill effect?

Well, definitely no room for epilogue at this rate. Looks like we're gonna end at the climax.

I see...I come at it from the point of view that while it's coming out serially now, in the future it will of course already have been written and we should be evaluating the full product. Otherwise, it's like looking at a building under construction and saying, "what a stupid building...

I like how this arc can be boiled down to: "You thought Ruu was kind of an idiot. Let me show you just how much you underestimated that."

I mean, each chapter is just six pages.

I wasn't comparing the stories at all. I was illustrating how readers are reacting, using a commonly known frame of reference. I could use any long story as an example there. If you thought I was saying, "this story is just like the Odyssey", then no wonder you have an issue with so much I...