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Starts off well enough, but has soured for several reasons: First, disjointed and underdeveloped ideas and understanding of concepts which are integral to the story. Second, later chapters contain many cut-away scenes that lack meaningful dialogue or nuance. They are too high up the pyramid...

@REDRED since this story is told in an era of noble social classes, the spelling--which is archaic for Americans--is accurate for any English speaking region of the approximate period. If anything, using "check" would be more anachronistic.

Think she saw something that made her remember?

The current translations need an editor. Badly. But, I don't even think its worth it for this story.

This manga is a professional lesson in writing a passive character.

@Crazyperson11 Not only that, imagine being retarded enough to think that switching from coinage to paper money would prevent hoarding of precious metals. I can't even get a laugh from how dumb this story is anymore.

If you guys need an editor I could have caught these typos in a single pass.

Bullshit detected.

setting aside the whole mary sue fiasco... >Just tuned piano can't be touched. u wat, author?

I love how these stories always utilize the MC being slighted in some way as an impetus to justify handing them cheat codes to life. Something about that message is irksome. Maybe its because a person who believes they are entitled to something any time things don't go their way is beyond...

Horray. Another isekai which not only brings nothing new to the table, but also sours the whole genre even further. Irredeemably bad start.

"Anyone who can say sorry and thank you is a good person." Nani! What the fuck? That is the most batshit insane ideology I've ever heard of, if that is translated correctly the mangaka has brain damage.

Tsukasa showing the knowledge that accompanies her age by busting out the pizza napoletana.

Anyone care to enumerate the references and memes in this chapter? Good god there's a lot.

Great, now I want Neapolitan pizza. San Marzano tomatoes truly are the best.

@forecast Authors who slip into third person omniscience to try and neatly tie up every little plot thread are garbage. A competent writer wouldn't need to coddle their readership and could instead incorporate resolution as a story/world-building element later on. This resolution is crude, and...

Casual sashimi in a fantasy world, never change Japan. Thanks for the update Uxtef.

Yep, would've been better to do this slowly perhaps as something that was going on in the background instead of all at once. It isn't terrible but could've been done better.

First one is just making new equations from like terms, but for the second it is just a factorization problem. One where you find that the easiest way to cancel every non-natural factor by adding a second copy of that number. You end up being able to pull out a 12 from the radical and make it...

Dormammu! I've come to bargain.