This series has all that gritty violence and death... and then the antagonists are all cackling supervillains who are evil because they are evil. Bit of a clash.
Much as I appreciate this series getting picked back up, the terrible proofreading is a bit painful. At the very least using a grammar checker would take you very little time.
I appreciate you picking this up, for what it's worth. However, as a group that is asking for Patreon donations, please at the very least run your scripts through a grammar checker even if you're not going to carefully proofread them.