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> Spoils a "future" twist in the title
> Doesn't actually show the already-spoiled twist in the first chapter
> Chapters separated by "parts"
> Overall edgy MC with edgy story premise

More fucking fantasy trash

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ahh i saw the raw from this and i was extreme angry .. thank you for your hard work
 
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This is legitimately the most trashy wish-fulfillment isekai edgelord story I've ever seen
Another one into the reading list
 

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Hot damn this is top tier garbage. Is this an out of season april fools joke?
 
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This is horrible, they spoiler it with the title, but then gave us an incomplete chapter, the author is fooling around too much with his own work.

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@ThunderaMaou
I agree, with that kind of title everything should of been put on the table in this first chapter. Splitting the chapter up just feels extra wrong in this case.
 
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Why the power split in chapter 1? get 3 full chapter and then split into whatever.
 
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Can someone link the raws or the novel or at least give us spoilers?
 

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@Luca44 https://www.novelupdates.com/series/the-mightiest-hero-of-black-my-party-members-betrayed-me-so-ill-stick-with-the-strongest-monster/
 
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I said this on another recent release, but, aren't you supposed to try and hook your reader with the first chapter? :thinking:
 

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