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@essen46
I genuinely don't understand how the word 'clumsy' means I'm trying to sound intellectual or like a professional film critic. I just really don't understand where you got that because if I was trying to sound smart I would try a lot harder than that and look up some way bigger words. Besides me saying it was clumsy isn't really harsh, me saying to throw the entire arc in the trash was harsh.
I'm glad we're both in agreement on the arc being too gimmicky though, the author is very good at those unexpected quick punches in the earlier chapters like how Miko's dad was a ghost all along or in chapter 4 with the cat and the scarred man and his ghost family. It may not have been accurate to say plot holes so much as inconsistencies which kinda go back to how Zen was originally a one off character in a chapter that was made before the manga was serialized. Such as, 'Where was his mom in chapter 4?', well it's probably just that the author likely had no intent to use him again later and kinda had to retroactively come up with a back story for this one off guy and set on using his mom. I also find it weird that we've seen ghosts/spirits interact and fight with each other before but the cat ghosts following him seem more intent on him than the ghost mom that killed them, add onto that the ghost from chapter 4 that got off the bench to stop following the cat and instead hiss at him instead of following the mom and attacking her (Which again, she wasn't there because it likely wasn't planned at the time). Also, the second twist of him actually being a dangerous murderer all along was treated more like a punchline rather than the very serious thing it was, which is weird when compared to how seriously the manga treated other things like the teacher's previous miscarriage.
Really my main complaints about this arc just come down to, like you said, the author working really hard for those twists when their strength is really way more in those quick one chapter twists or those bittersweet moments like Miko's dad or the ghost trying to speak to his widowed wife. Those chapters are really fantastic.
I genuinely don't understand how the word 'clumsy' means I'm trying to sound intellectual or like a professional film critic. I just really don't understand where you got that because if I was trying to sound smart I would try a lot harder than that and look up some way bigger words. Besides me saying it was clumsy isn't really harsh, me saying to throw the entire arc in the trash was harsh.
I'm glad we're both in agreement on the arc being too gimmicky though, the author is very good at those unexpected quick punches in the earlier chapters like how Miko's dad was a ghost all along or in chapter 4 with the cat and the scarred man and his ghost family. It may not have been accurate to say plot holes so much as inconsistencies which kinda go back to how Zen was originally a one off character in a chapter that was made before the manga was serialized. Such as, 'Where was his mom in chapter 4?', well it's probably just that the author likely had no intent to use him again later and kinda had to retroactively come up with a back story for this one off guy and set on using his mom. I also find it weird that we've seen ghosts/spirits interact and fight with each other before but the cat ghosts following him seem more intent on him than the ghost mom that killed them, add onto that the ghost from chapter 4 that got off the bench to stop following the cat and instead hiss at him instead of following the mom and attacking her (Which again, she wasn't there because it likely wasn't planned at the time). Also, the second twist of him actually being a dangerous murderer all along was treated more like a punchline rather than the very serious thing it was, which is weird when compared to how seriously the manga treated other things like the teacher's previous miscarriage.
Really my main complaints about this arc just come down to, like you said, the author working really hard for those twists when their strength is really way more in those quick one chapter twists or those bittersweet moments like Miko's dad or the ghost trying to speak to his widowed wife. Those chapters are really fantastic.