It's fine; it's good enough. Machine Translating often gets a bad rep because of the lazy translations... but yours obviously has a bit more effort... and that makes a difference.
Well, this translation is good to read. And some people won't mind it even if this is machine, cos they just want to read. And yours is quality, even if I'm just intermediate in English, for me there were no mistakes at all.
Good job on this. Like the others said I didn't realize it was machine done until you said so. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed the novel, so this is pretty true so far.
Think he can use his 'cut' ability to destroy enemy weapons? Armor? You can't use it on living things. But he can use it on the skills of living things, so their clothes and weapons should be fair game.
Waiting for him to start stealing weapon enhchantments, lol.