A Rank Party wo Ridatsu Shita Ore wa, Moto Oshiego Tachi to Meikyuu Shinbu wo Mezasu. - Ch. 71 - The Key to the Mystery is Simon!?

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That is actually an incredibly cool system for a dungeon which could make it perfect for adventurers of all ranks.

new recruits could just finish to go to where the weakest enemies are whereas veterans could go battle dragons

obviously it’d take a lot to confirm that’s exactly how things work but I still really like the concept at least
 
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page 10 top right "we're" should just be "we were"
Yoke's deduction seems pretty reasonable. That's a pretty damn cool dungeon .
 
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His theory aren't really back up by anything except his guts.
 
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That is actually an incredibly cool system for a dungeon which could make it perfect for adventurers of all ranks.

new recruits could just finish to go to where the weakest enemies are whereas veterans could go battle dragons

obviously it’d take a lot to confirm that’s exactly how things work but I still really like the concept at least
The only thing is that the people that dive that dungeon have of have the right kind of mental discipline.

What happened to Yoke's party is proof of that: "Be careful of what you wish for. You just might get it."
 
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switching to this translation from the ripped K-manga release is wild for me due to how there are many areas that need fixing on here.

Tips for the typesetter, shrink the spacing between lines and font size to make text fit better, leaving it all as one font and having the text leave the bubbles just looks lazy. Depending on the software the typesetter is using for the text this might differ, but I recommend using the same line spacing as the font size just because it all matches up nicely. Also when you move a word across 2 lines, do add in a dash at the end the first parts of the word just to improve how it reads.

Excuse the small rant, just reading the chapter these bits were bugging me and wanted to make some suggestions for improvement.
 
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So they can now wish for a way to remove the curse, that the Underworld Queen Persephone put on Yoke, as they enter the dungeon and get it.
 
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page 10 top right "we're" should just be "we were"
Yoke's deduction seems pretty reasonable. That's a pretty damn cool dungeon .
Actually, "we're" as a contraction does apply to "we were", as well as "we are"; the latter is simply far more commonly used, is all.

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Still quite the unproven theory, the teleportation makes sense since the floors always change, but the desire sensor could be complete chance, especially with a sample size this small.
Not really; Thunderpike found them on the very first floor down, but they were on the third-second floor stairs, according to their own travels. What was their goal? To find Yoke's team. His arguments about his own team's goal and Benwood's team's goal also match up. Even if it doesn't work exactly as he's surmised, there's definitely something similar at work, there.
 
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That is actually an incredibly cool system for a dungeon which could make it perfect for adventurers of all ranks.

new recruits could just finish to go to where the weakest enemies are whereas veterans could go battle dragons

obviously it’d take a lot to confirm that’s exactly how things work but I still really like the concept at least
it's also a very good explaination about how roguelike dungeons works in other games
 
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I could get people being persuaded by mere speculation, but it would be just too convenient if Yoke turned out to be right. It's a clever dungeon mechanism, and that's exactly why it's not something meant to be figured out in one go, and then talk about it with absolute confidence. I think the only way it would hold my suspension if disbelief is if Yoke admits he pulled it all out of his ass just so he can be given the green light for the rescue mission.
 
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Aaaand stealing this idea for a D&D Campaign...

The only issue with that system, in particular with actual players, is: what happens when everyone wishes for different things?
One guy wants to see a sea of gold, another wants a mountain of resources, and the mage wants to fight a lich, etc...
Do you randomly select one destination that fits one specific criteria, do you teleport all of the players to where they individually want to go, or do you create something on the spot that fits everyone's combined wishes?

I assume the latter, but that'd require a lot of planing on the spot.
 

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