after those chapter i can finally pinpoint it. the novel flow is a bit off. i would describe it as robotic girly fantasy. the overall plot is alright, while cliche there is no big issue. however how it is draw, the conversations, and scene choices, it all feels a bit too robotic or too jerky. surprisingly, the one i feel are very similar, in its rigidity, are the very cliche male MC stories where everything seems to surround them and all women seem to live only for the MC. those kind of story feels like metaphorical plastic, even when there being no big issue, and i have the same feeling for this one.