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So after reading everything so far,it was good at one point but this doesn't make much sense at all...
Basically just feels like the story is made up randomly to fit the genre with jumps out of basic logic you could use for that setup so I'd say it's overrated to the now drop it off since it's painful to read the developement being as it is.
Trope used is the "no one like her/him so I'll be commonsenseless and pursue her/him anyway" or "how to date a reject of society 101".
Patrick is an archetype stupid just as much as any other characters out of it for some reasons with his "you're a girl" even thought she's like invulnerable to that kinda weak attacks, which ends up from him following the earlier 101 I mentionned.
The nobles around are just as dumb sadly but we can at least fault their society being as it is, after all they've been educated by that.
How the hell does that random slow dude steal the flute out of her without her noticing when she's supposed to be the strongest outta the world ? Don't go telling me "she was off guard" at this point it doesn't make sense even if she was since that earlier date a reject of society 101 showed how she could react regardless by one punching that mob.
The story did start out somehow interesting specially with a stoic main character that doesn't feel like needing romance or something, but with how it's going can somehow see how much degraded this story turns into especially since there's that romance tag can just look forward to the usual "oh look I love him actually" for the reason coming outta the 101...
Patrick is an archetype stupid just as much as any other characters out of it for some reasons with his "you're a girl" even thought she's like invulnerable to that kinda weak attacks, which ends up from him following the earlier 101 I mentionned.
The nobles around are just as dumb sadly but we can at least fault their society being as it is, after all they've been educated by that.
How the hell does that random slow dude steal the flute out of her without her noticing when she's supposed to be the strongest outta the world ? Don't go telling me "she was off guard" at this point it doesn't make sense even if she was since that earlier date a reject of society 101 showed how she could react regardless by one punching that mob.
The story did start out somehow interesting specially with a stoic main character that doesn't feel like needing romance or something, but with how it's going can somehow see how much degraded this story turns into especially since there's that romance tag can just look forward to the usual "oh look I love him actually" for the reason coming outta the 101...
Basically just feels like the story is made up randomly to fit the genre with jumps out of basic logic you could use for that setup so I'd say it's overrated to the now drop it off since it's painful to read the developement being as it is.