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Oh sorry about thatMh, close
On page 7 you still have Cain saying "So he didn't came because he sensed..." it needs to be come, not came.
Otherwise, good.
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Oh sorry about thatMh, close
On page 7 you still have Cain saying "So he didn't came because he sensed..." it needs to be come, not came.
Otherwise, good.
Departure at gate 3...I have no idea what I'm reading anymore. The "story" jumps from one place to the other with absolutely no connection. The only thing that remains constant is our mary sue. If at least there was more cute sister it'd be more bearable. Oh well, time to drop this
Hates seeing a lot of stories legal wife of the king trying to kill concubines just because the king's playing around. Its king's faults lolStill, quite scummy move there, make a move on commoner which they can't refuse, using their baby as gift to other nation/noble as favor and called it honour. so you lost your freedom, lost your baby. if suspicion rises, they might kill the mother to shut it clean. the mother is orphan, great, no one care if one orphan went missing.
cain father said noble have noble duty, commoner have their duty.is being toy and discarded is commoner duty then?
So, when will the story start? If all of the previous parts were fillers?For all intent and purposes, we haven't even started the story
would we even got to that point i wonderSo, when will the story start? If all of the previous parts were fillers?
Not really sure about it, could be king's relative who did it.So the King raped a girl and is now selling the baby for political gain.
And everyone is fine with this?
Not really sure about it, could be king's relative who did it.
DamnWell, I somehow got so curious I checked ahead in the WN, and turns outit's the girl who is his relative.
They basically found an already pregnant illegitimate royal descendant and are trying to quietly resolve the situation without causing a public scandal.
I’m glad I withheld judgement against the king. The vaguely worded line “there’s no doubt that she’s a child of royal blood” made me suspect that there was something more going on.Well, I somehow got so curious I checked ahead in the WN, and turns outit's the girl who is his relative.
They basically found an already pregnant illegitimate royal descendant and are trying to quietly resolve the situation without causing a public scandal.
she probably will, Cain likes to fuck up the main plot for Dihaving liberty as ur name is pretty cool I hope she survives.