An Introvert's Hookup Hiccups: This Gyaru Is Head Over Heels for Me! - Ch. 21

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What in the actual fucking terminator is this build? Looks so weird.
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The Mangaka was focused 100% on the girl, our MC was just there to exist and it shows on the quality of several panels
 
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What the fuck? Am I the only one here who finds the whole “daddy” and “mommy” thing rather weird in a situation where they aren't even comfortable with the fact that they're dating? This felt like a very cheap and forced setup to the “we have a baby together” situation that will obviously unfold in the next chapter because of that kid at the end.

Edit: Forgot to mention something — she asked to call him “daddy” just after mentioning that he resembles her real father. How is this shit not wierd?
I was afraid I was the only sane human left in this forum, seeing as nobody else even made mention of how weird this was.

Thank you for so concisely explaining the issue, my friend.
 
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What a cute date… except he thinks she’s faking the entire fucking time and doesn’t trust her. Seriously this has already gone on far too long. Talk before something irreversible happens please.
 
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Thanks for the TL.
This series actually ended at page 3 of this chapter, because after he rotated his head too far he snapped his neck and died. The rest is just all taking place in his head.
 
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I have a lot of things to say but I'll shorten to 2 things only.

1. If my girl told me "You look like my dad, can I call you daddy?", I think I would be the most weirded out I've ever been in my life...

2. I know what the problem of this manga is. (one of them at least) This is the typical manga artist who is kinda good a drawing girls, but sucks at drawing boys because he draws chicks 90% of the time.
You can tell by the build of our MC. He's like square af, like, bro is built like a minecraft cube. His arms and legs look so fucking stiff it's crazy. His collarbone is very weird too for some reason.
 
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This part i figured it out but from look of it (and his comment) she would played a bigger role in story than mere "Lost Child" or supernatural element of the story.
She indeed plays a role beyond merely the one-off "lost child" trope (though it'll take some time before that happens) and this is not a supernatural story.
 
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Gonna take a while to get to the reveal, as it's only around midway through volume 2 of the LN (reveal is at the end of volume 4). Though by the end of volume 2, definitely past the point of no return. Yoshin knowing the whole thing was a batsu game setup will kind of be a lifeline for Nanami and her friends when the reveal comes, as there's no shock factor
 
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I know art never was this title's forte, but for some reason, I feel this chapter looks exceptionally ugly.
I'll take a wild guess and say its cause of the MCs new look. His new hair literally ruins so much for me at least...

Also the arms and fingers are to straight in a lot of picture. One can notice that if they look at MCs arms. They look more like lego figure movements than actual fluent drawings
 
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MC's haircut just looks awful, looks like he's one that gets cucked in NTR doujins.
Ever since bros hair got changed I can't really read this manga anymore. I mean it had such a good premised and went decently... why did they make MC look like a Lego Figure with the wrong hair attached to it outta nowhere
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Its like 70% of drawing power gone to the girl, 29% to the backgrounds, and the 1% the dude was drawn by the artist 5yo kid/niece/whoever was at hand atm.
 

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