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I'm not happy in author, lack of rule knowledge.
Clear foul when they took ball from AI, grabbing by shirt and then barging from behind in scoring situation, PK and a yellow.
Then High Foot by Tripone, a foul and a yellow. This was one was very clear.
Author wanted to showcase Aoi inexperience and showcase massive gap between Tripone and Aoi , but lack of rule knowledge kills all the momentum and drama for readers in this case.
Welp, hopefully those stuff get worked out along the way for author and we get some other nice bits, like what actually Aoi was thinking to decide to cut in twice instead of passing and what Kuri is thinking.
Still very excited for next chapters.
Clear foul when they took ball from AI, grabbing by shirt and then barging from behind in scoring situation, PK and a yellow.
Then High Foot by Tripone, a foul and a yellow. This was one was very clear.
Author wanted to showcase Aoi inexperience and showcase massive gap between Tripone and Aoi , but lack of rule knowledge kills all the momentum and drama for readers in this case.
Welp, hopefully those stuff get worked out along the way for author and we get some other nice bits, like what actually Aoi was thinking to decide to cut in twice instead of passing and what Kuri is thinking.
Still very excited for next chapters.