Azadarake no Classmate ga Shinpai - Ch. 9

[waterflame]

Inb4 self insert MC rapes her the next chapter. Then she commits suicide.

Sheesh talk about worst ending.

The court told him that the high school girl he victimized is now frightened of interactions with men, has missed school, and can’t stand being on trains with lots of people or having people behind her. The court said the case won’t end for the victim and he must keep her in mind and must never repeat anything like this again.

Funny enough I just read an article on that before reading this...

 

[dankenglish]

just call the police MC

 

[BCS]

Inb4 self insert MC rapes her the next chapter. Then she commits suicide.

Hey, at least it would be a twist instead of literally exactly same shit every "chapter"

 

[Doutorfunga]

this whole format is getting tiring honestly. I get the short one page storytelling being trendy and effective on social media, especially since I get baited each update hoping to see notable improvement, but at this point i'm just begging for a proper story... or at least, another page...

like I want to be invested, I want to interact more with the character, but it's all gatekept by this format; so it can just feel so shallow at times because of it. only thing to do is pick up on the subtleties, or be an active enabler of her abuse in buying the fanbox lol.

probably just gonna let this cook in the back until enough pages pile up to make it worth touching again

True, these one page templated series are getting old QUICK

 

[Robinisback]

I really want to punch the fuck out of the MC, this guy just seems like an stupid asshole who's riding high and thinking he's ought to help her. Dude, the only thing you're doing is making her feel uncomfortable. You do not say "I like you" just after some days you met her when she clearly doesn't trust you. Considering, how he acts and talks it's not weird of her to think he's just a horny dog who's after an easy and broken target.

The MC better step up this game.

 

[orangerain7734]

She's like a wary animal. She doesn't trust the MC and his claims of her being cute, so she bites back, but she accepts food offerings. I can't blame her for feeling like that.

 

[Kurausukun]

So is this thing going to like... go anywhere? Or are we going to get literally the exact same thing every chapter

 

[wallsg]

Inb4 self insert MC rapes her the next chapter. Then she commits suicide.

Sheesh talk about worst ending.

No, the Worst Ending is when her mother sells her to someone and she falls for his thick, whatever, and sends the MC pictures or a video saying that she's living the life she wants now and and he doesn't have to save her any more.

Thanks for playing!

 

[wallsg]

I don't even know why I'm still reading this

Because you only have to read one at a time as they come out so it doesn't seem like you're wasting any time at all.

 

[Chronigan]

The title is "I'm worried about the classmate who is covered in bruises", but he seems less worried than horny. Honestly I'm totally on her side, he seems as scummy as she makes him out to be.

It'd be nice if this had the "MC" slowly warmed up to her as he spends time with her, but their interactions are too shallow, and it really does make it seem like he only approached her for selfish reasons, as she had always stated.
Then again, based on what others said of the "adult content", it's likely this is meant to go in a dark way and there is no happy end or good people.

All this said, it feels like the wheels are spinning in place at this point, how many more panels of her simply insulting the boy do we need?

Considering we have no idea ahy the pov character is doing any of this, your views on the mc's motives are your own. Has it actually been confirmed the pov character is male?

 

[CyanHide]

That's kinda the thing though. He hasn't offered any help. It isn't that he didn't help her off herself like she asked, he's not going through any proper procedures to actually do anything about her problems. Instead, he tries to approach her romantically which, yeah, given the pictures her mom is selling of her, she should be suspicious of. What he's doing is like going up to someone who's bleeding out and telling them you'll pray for them. Like, bitch, get me a doctor.

Oof, what chapter was that? I don't remember seeing pictures of her being sold

 

[ARealCoolGuy]

Considering we have no idea ahy the pov character is doing any of this, your views on the mc's motives are your own. Has it actually been confirmed the pov character is male?

Well yeah, pretty much any comment is going to just be someone's opinion, and it should also be noted that every point I made about the MC's motives were pre-empted with "it seems", or "it feels" - nothing I said was asserted as a fact, so I'm not sure why you're treating it as if I had.

Secondly, what would it change if the MC were a lesbian thinking with her pussy, instead of a boy thinking with his dick? The Abused girl has clearly stated that the MC has ulterior motives (sex and romance), and the MC has seemingly proven that to be the case, regardless of whether they're a boy or girl. So why even care if I had made an assumption?

 

[Chronigan]

Well yeah, pretty much any comment is going to just be someone's opinion, and it should also be noted that every point I made about the MC's motives were pre-empted with "it seems", or "it feels" - nothing I said was asserted as a fact, so I'm not sure why you're treating it as if I had.

Secondly, what would it change if the MC were a lesbian thinking with her pussy, instead of a boy thinking with his dick? The Abused girl has clearly stated that the MC has ulterior motives (sex and romance), and the MC has seemingly proven that to be the case, regardless of whether they're a boy or girl. So why even care if I had made an assumption?

What has the POV character done to make them seem horny?

All we have are the girl's reactions to what they are doing. So any opinion you have is based on your own views as to what is going on, not on any actual evidence. The only things we actually know are that she is being abused and someone is attempting to help her. We have no evidence at all on their motives.

I was simply pointing out that what you said was based on your own biases and not on anything that has actually happened in the story.

 

[ARealCoolGuy]

What has the POV character done to make them seem horny?
So any opinion you have is based on your own views as to what is going on, not on any actual evidence.

Well, the FMC consistently stated she felt that the MC was approaching her with ulterior motives. Later the MC called her cute (flirting with her), and then not too long ago confessed to her - both of these are factual things that have happened in the story.
I think my opinions are reasonable assumptions based on these things.

Feel free to tell me why that is not the case though.

 

[NervusVagus]

In just a short 9 pages time her distrust of MC has turned out to be completely justified

 

[Meridis]

Oof, what chapter was that? I don't remember seeing pictures of her being sold

this is the sfw version...I guess you could call it that, OsisNie posted scanlations of some of the missing pages. The link is back in chapter 5's comments. It might not show up on your searches or listings if you have it set to hide ones marked as pornography, though.

 

[Chronigan]

Well, the FMC consistently stated she felt that the MC was approaching her with ulterior motives. Later the MC called her cute (flirting with her), and then not too long ago confessed to her - both of these are factual things that have happened in the story.
I think my opinions are reasonable assumptions based on these things.

Feel free to tell me why that is not the case though.

Yes the girl has stated that is what she thinks is going on.

But because she thinks that is what is happening, doesn't mean it is. A person that is being constantly abused and taken advantage of probably has a hard time accepting that there is someone that would care for them out of the goodness of their heart. We have no actual evidence about what the POV character is thinking.

We don't know the context of the POV character saying "I like you". The girl could of been talking yo herself saying that she is worthless or that no one likes her and the POV character was trying to cheer her up. Once again we have no context on what the POV character is thinking.

Anything regarding the POV character's motives is pure conjecture based on our personal beliefs and biases.

The POV character has so far not tried to touch the girl or offered to do something in exchange for the girl doing something for them. So far their actions have not been exploitive.

What has the POV character actually done to make you think they are horny and want to take advantage of the girl?

 

[CyanHide]

this is the sfw version...I guess you could call it that, OsisNie posted scanlations of some of the missing pages. The link is back in chapter 5's comments. It might not show up on your searches or listings if you have it set to hide ones marked as pornography, though.

Yeah, I found it earlier. I am now in excruciating pain, especially because of the implications from the fact that normally someone has to pay to access the raws for it, and how everything is from a 1st Person POV

 

[TanyaTheEvil]

She is putting out these digs at him to see if he responds, thanks for the chapter

 

[Kurbo]

This I especially agree with, if you really fell in love with a girl like this then your either that down bad or just have a savior complex.