Beatrice - Vol. 1 Ch. 37

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What kind of idiot bandits attacks a clearly well armed group/caravan? Since they're noble/military i assume they'd move in at least a sizeable group too.
 
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Wish it had been the redheaded dude to grab her instead of trigger but....bruh, don't grab onto a girl when your clothes are covered in blood, have some sense.
 
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Damn, i thought the guys will still hugging Chloe when the Archduke saw her, it can fume the jealousy but thus kind of progress is also very very good too hohohoho thank you for the new chapter!
 
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*remembers the time he ransacked her castle, murdered everyone, made her a prisoner and slave, and almost had her killed*

*blushes* uwu I have PTSD, but he’s just so cooool

Meanwhile our male lead:
*manhandles her while covered in blood without a care for her mental state*

This is comedy at this point lmao
 
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There is no way a group of bandits would attack a single knight in full armor without hesitating, so a full company, no way. This a dumb, if the author wants to draw that, he should at least make the bandits desesperate so there would be a reason to attack them.
 
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Kyaaaaa! My goodness!

Anyways, the arcduke in the warning page really looks like wang yibo/lan zhan of untamed. Haha
Thanks for the update!
 
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Yeah I agree that ambush was really unrealistic. If they had at least prepared a proper trap, instead of throwing a single knife towards a female slave.
 
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Cute first half of the chapter... but That fight made no sense.. it was a weak set up ... npc looking bandits attacking a whole set of knights? It would’ve been more convincing if we were shown some unique ambush-friendly terrain...but that was an easy open-field slaughter ..
 
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What a weak ass ambush, they should had have used crossbows, even if they're peak fighters they can't dodge crossbow bolts.
 
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this chapter is pure disapointment...

making a bloody scene romantic is fucked up... I mean come on he is covered in blood and we have flower background ! this isn't comedy or tragedy it's pitiful!

if she crumbled from her PSTD or if he discovered her identity it would've been better...
and here we are having her see his "cool" side

What a useless ambush !
 
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Am I the only one who still dislikes him ? It feels like everyone started with hating him but grew to like him and I didn't.
I don't think he is the worst but he is far from being an ideal ML. I get that even historically speaking, countries kill the nobles of the country they're invading. That's a given so it's not complete nonsense that he nearly killed her in the beginning. However, his subordinate that wanted to have fun with her just disgusted me and the ML who has such high ranking subordinate isn't any better.
Also, just because he isn't the devil it doesn't mean she should fall for him. He almost killed her, how do you go from that trauma to falling for him (we all know it'll eventually happen). It just leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I would've felt better if she ended up with the servant sh's friends with
 
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I keep trying to like this but there are so many little issues each chapter like, He says she doesn't lie while using an example of her lying straight to his face, some other people ruined those clothes. Why would anyone attack them who doesn't know about this expedition, isn't it called "the hunt" and a massive deal that lasts about a year.
Why did he pick her up and hold her so close, he's not aware of any feeling for her other than "she's one of mine" if that's true would he pick up anyone else like that, say a male guard. Where did trigger go, he just left her there in the dirt, didn't even check on her? Anyways, I still hope the flow gets better
 

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