@Swezed
Page 5, Panel 3, Bubble 1:
"decide the go the" -> "decide to go the"
"20s" -> "20's"
Also, if you're going to use a tilde, don't let it be floating at the top. It's stupid. Move it down or fix the font so it appears in the middle of the characters, not at the top.
EDIT:
Page 11, Panel 5, Bubble 1:
"talking in front of a public!"
A public? What is "a public"?
EDIT 2:
Page 34, Panel 2, Bubble 2:
"upseeing" -> "up seeing"
EDIT 3:
Page 42, Panel 1, Bubble 1:
"for the piece your first years in oil painting" -> "for the piece you first years in oil painting"
EDIT 4:
Don't make the guy typesetting it do QC. Get your proofreader to do a second pass on the typeset pages. Proofreading changes based on how the script is displayed and read. In other words, the PR can change depending on the typesetting.
Also, you'd have less mistakes if you're not the one checking your own work.
EDIT 5:
You say "quality over quantity" and yet this is the result. And this is only the script issues. Additionally, in your second credits page you spell "consistent" as "conistant".
Seriously. Every release it's something with you guys. Get a proper QC.
Lastly, "it takes much effort" is grammatically fucked. It's something an ESL would say, which is what I'm assuming you are, and if so, get your proofreader, who is hopefully
not ESL, to check your credits pages too.