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@TDSgaming I definitely have a bias toward the beginning of this story because I was a miserable angry high-school outcast who's only outlet for my hatred of everyone was wrestling and boxing. Then I too got a beautiful girlfriend who lightened me up a ton. However, I think the beginning premise of this story is much more intriguing and enthralling, consistent, and had much better pacing than nags and komi. Nags and komi had many random disconjointed chapters with no developments or progress to the overall plot. You could completely skip them and u wouldn't be any less in the know of the characters growth or plot progression. Let's call them gag chapters. In this story, every single chapter is important to the overall plot and character progression and there still funny and/or heart warming. One of the hardest things to do in writing is to make every page important to the overall story and I think boku no kokoro has succeeded in this so far where as nags and komi have not