goof in page 3 and page 4 : the colors of the socks of the brat change from black -> grey -> black .
- attacking a little boy is a crime .
- er , news flash for you , main girl : 90 % of the stories of henta* involves crimes : rap*ng , having $ex with minors , having $ex with animals , cheating , prostitution , black-mailing , torturing , murdering , ....
page 8 and page 9 : imagine a henta* that has only 30 pages , but 29 pages are about introducing characters , describing the relationship , dating , ... , then finally the last page shows their $ex scene . no one would buy this henta* book , lol .
page 12 : "why is this guy so popular ?" , "how would that even occur ?" . i guess the author is making fun of some modern harem stories : all the girls falls in love with the MC for no reason at all . these stories are just self-insert , wish-fullfillment stories of the virgin authors , lol .
some example of bad harem stories , dont waste your time with them :
- grand blue dreaming .
- devil part-timer .
- re:monster , aka retar* monster , aka isekai goblin : because im not a human anyomre , im a monster goblin now so i can rap* all the b!tches in this isekai .
- nisekoi .
- quint quint 5 toubun sisters .
- sword art online .
- isekai smartphone .
- shield hero isekai .
- Yamaguchi Mikoto 's Game obu Familia – Family Senki , aka isekai with my step-mother and 2 step-aunts .
- Parallel Paradise , aka isekai into an all-female world , the MC gets to fukk all the girls , but still b!tching all the time because he is a women-hater .
- World's End Harem : in the future , all men in the world are dead , the women are begging a male brat to have $ex with them to repopulate the world , but he refuses because he only love men .