Cupid no Hatsukoi

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Main ship is alright, don't really like how the people are being brainwashed into relationship. Either way, need a serialisation to get my opinions straight about this one.
 
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It's definitely brainwashing, but... is cupid's arrows the only way for people to fall in love? So it's that or nothing? That makes it more of a dilemma.
 
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Story seems interesting but I don't know how to feel about some1 shooting magical/holy arrows through peoples heads to more or less force them to fall in love. Atleast I wouldn't like my love interest to get brainwashed into liking me

Yeah, I noticed that too, especially with the very first few pages. The girl was clearly about to reject the dude till the arrow hit. This sorta reminds me of "Love Tyrant", where the cupid would sorta force a relationship as long she write their names in a book. Since this is a one-shot, it is not TOO bad, but as a full-on story, I would hope there were some nuances and rules for that lol
 
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Some good basics but needs some rethinking of how her power works before serialisation. Right now it just looks like it forces her target to fall for whatever is in front of them with no regards to what their feelings had been so far, and that's a bit mindrape-y there, mate.

Art could also see a bit of improvement. Specifically, big girls, yes please, but right now she just looks like he drew a rather regular body and plopped a head three sizes too small on top of it in some of those panels.
 

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