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Woo another BIG girl. shot +1
Story seems interesting but I don't know how to feel about some1 shooting magical/holy arrows through peoples heads to more or less force them to fall in love. Atleast I wouldn't like my love interest to get brainwashed into liking me
HOLY F U C K
I don't really get it myself, from what I can understand, the arrows themselves don't actually brainwash the target, they actually enhance the feeling the target already has... I think? Its not made very clear.Story seems interesting but I don't know how to feel about some1 shooting magical/holy arrows through peoples heads to more or less force them to fall in love. Atleast I wouldn't like my love interest to get brainwashed into liking me
Some good basics but needs some rethinking of how her power works before serialisation. Right now it just looks like it forces her target to fall for whatever is in front of them with no regards to what their feelings had been so far, and that's a bit mindrape-y there, mate.
Art could also see a bit of improvement. Specifically, big girls, yes please, but right now she just looks like he drew a rather regular body and plopped a head three sizes too small on top of it in some of those panels.