Danjo-hi 1:39 no Heikou Sekai wa Omoi no Hoka Futsuu (Fan Colored) - Vol. 3 Ch. 156 - Aya Konno's Objective

[MangaDex]

 

[Geako]

You know I am trying make Dj, But what is making me frustrated most? It's the typesetting and dialog bubbles. Even more than the drawing.

Here have the cleaned drawing of Class of 2A.

 

[shumuck]

5 more colored chapters and I'll do another full series re-read. Thanks.

 

[Kaiserwald]

I have a question about page 3: is Miku a bodyguard for "a" or for "the" male student? And there's a mistake on page 5: "Whenever there's a story about a man being attacked..." should be "Whenever there's a story about a man's being attacked..." because "a man" here is the subject of a gerund while the gerund is the object of a preposition. Yes, it's a gerund, not a participle, because the focus is clearly on the action ("a story about being attacked"). The same mistake can be found on page 11 ("I imagined Chabatake touching Satou-kun...").

 

[ipod123432]

Aya such a pure good girl

 

[Psychronia]

She's too pure for how much she gets bullied.

 

[MrTurtleMan]

2nd best girl getting a chapter to herself

She's too pure for how much she gets bullied.

The author likes to bully the best girl in each group of 3. Kana, Aya, and Sumire

 

[Geako]

2nd best girl getting a chapter to herself

The author likes to bully the best girl in each group of 3. Kana, Aya, and Sumire

Yeah, I absolutely hate that.

 

[MarqFJA87]

Cross-quoting from the thread for Ch.155, since the quote is about this chapter. I've edited some of the page numbers, since they were off.

There are some things in the following chapter 156 that could be adjusted:

Spoiler: SOME STUFF FROM CHAPTER 156

C156-P3:
...SHE'S KNOWN AS THE "QUEEN OF POWER." SHE'S ALSO THE BODYGUARD FOR THE MALE STUDENTS.
-> it should be "QUEEN OF POWER". <- the dot got misplaced.
-> The second sentence feels weird. That wording makes it sound like she's the one and only or she's guarding all males...
-> "LIKE ME, SHE'S A BODYGUARD FOR MALE STUDENTS." or "LIKE ME, SHE'S THE BODYGUARD OF A MALE STUDENT."

C156-P4:
... SEXUAL AROUSAL TOWARD MEN, ...
-> typo: it should be TOWARDS MEN

C156-P5:
... AS THE "LAW OF CHEST THREAT." <- again, the dot got misplaced here.

C156-P14:
AYA KONNO, WAS PURE-HEARTED. <- that comma is kinda obsolete.

@Geako In case you somehow missed it, since you didn't seem to acknowledge these in the other thread.

 

[Geako]

Cross-quoting from the thread for Ch.155, since the quote is about this chapter. I've edited some of the page numbers, since they were off.



@Geako In case you somehow missed it, since you didn't seem to acknowledge these in the other thread.

Texting is big work, especially when it's raster layer instead of text layer, so I overlooked it this time. I will correct it later. I also want to change all 'chest' with 'brest'.