Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki

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The author decided to redo chapters 31-35 so that the threesome actually happens. With this my interest in the manga reached zero.

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Well that explains the quality drop.
From the prospective of the editor, I can kind of get where they're coming from as the original chapters were more character focused and somber to watch, with Ch. 35 ending with the teacher verging on raping the girl... but honestly that's the point, as dark as it was, it does give opportunity for the MC to shine beyond saying "I love you", that could easily give progress on the inner-conflict that Agawa has between settling down with a boy but not wanting to be hurt.

...while the rewritten chapters completely obliterate that development, as the MC proves himself to be hypocritical and no better than the other boys that are shagging her. The girl went back to fucking with her pseudo-BF, and we're introduced to this childhood tomboy gf that undermines the original relationship that the MC has as they both went on their merry way to do their own things.

Like, I get it, Akito's a cutie, and the President's a beaut. It would be a shame to just drop the either of them out of their potential, as much as it could've been a separate story like We Never Learn where each of the girls get their own ending, it wouldn't feel the same. And to be honest, I had the same feeling when I was reading Nagatoro when similar characters were put on the sideline in favor of the main ship, but it made sense there.

Senpai wouldn't just suddenly be chasing after Gamo-chan and President after he dedicated about an entire year and the whole series dedicating himself to Nagatoro, whom he likes. The story had a lot of build-up with a lot of reasons why he liked her, and it would be really out of character if he did start going skirt-chasing and ran off with other girls (as much as he could), which is exactly what happened here.

Honestly, the whole thing feels like a "What If" spiral out of control, there's no actual plot progression here a la Rent-a-Girlfriend as if the progress that we had made so far were reverted in favor of making the series a harem comedy.
There was so many points in the story that could've just gone back to the plot between Agawa and MC but just didn't, I read the series so there would be more detail of how he and her can get together than the original doujinshi version, not for there to be no plot to speak of.
 
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It doesn't make any sense at all after the rewrite. MC's whole personality and motivations that existed in chapters prior to 31 were rewritten out of existence to make the threesome happen.

It's not like he couldn't have just written in a threesome naturally later if he really needed to, without turning the MC into a purely penis-brained retard. I also wish they would've continued the plot threads that apparently have been entirely dropped after the rewrite. Wouldn't make any sense for Agawa's sister to have a revenge plot now like was brewing originally. Was really looking forward to seeing where that was going, but fuck me I guess.

The editor should've beaten the mangaka with a bat instead of getting him the okay for this moronic rework.
I think Akito’s plot line kind of serves as a foil to MC’s frankly moronic and wishful thinking that Agawa will suddenly just like him out of the 50 (?) other sex friends that she has. I think it is good for him to see the alternative: you dont have to be with someone who is super unfaithful, you can have a loving relationship otherwise. So the story can go in 2 directions: 1. Akito, in which the MC finally realizes theres no ‘fixing’ people 2. Agawa, in which she realizes that she actually loves the MC because hes about to actually get a girlfriend without her
 
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I think Akito’s plot line kind of serves as a foil to MC’s frankly moronic and wishful thinking that Agawa will suddenly just like him out of the 50 (?) other sex friends that she has. I think it is good for him to see the alternative: you dont have to be with someone who is super unfaithful, you can have a loving relationship otherwise. So the story can go in 2 directions: 1. Akito, in which the MC finally realizes theres no ‘fixing’ people 2. Agawa, in which she realizes that she actually loves the MC because hes about to actually get a girlfriend without her

I feel like that's not really something that needed to be pointed out though. He was aware of the difficult path he would face trying to pursue Agawa, and he chose it. Though after the rewrite, MC seems to have experienced total brain death. He chose to entirely throw away his principles and that whole dynamic he had with Agawa. So, when Akito is introduced, she's not even serving as a foil to Agawa. She's simply a bridge to get him back to a relationship with Agawa due to the problems introduced by the horrendous rewrite. It's like a get out of jail free card gifted to the completely undeserving MC. As things stand, he doesn't deserve Agawa. He doesn't deserve Akito. He deserves to be treated with dismissal by both. Yet, the direction the writing is heading seems to be rewarding him with both.

Option 3 seems the most likely to me: Since the rewrite was predicated on the mangaka wanting to draw a 3P, and they abandoned the plot thread that was started after the whole scene with Agawa / her sister in order to write Akito in, MC just gets with the both of them. (And potentially more.)
 
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You guys deserve it, this shit was a shitshow since day 1 and you still insisted in reading this piece of shit, time wasted successfully, congratulations.

I'm out, peace.
 
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Ok i know this sounds wierd, Im not an Avid NTR fan but i am curious as to what was going to happen at the end of chapter 35. Seems the closest ill ever get is seeing what your thoughts are. So what do you think would have happend?
 
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I get that Agawa is like the main point in the story, but if the author turns Akito into mini Agawa or would rather Agawa be his girl then the author is more then likely a cuck. But this is kind of a goofy read anyway so ig its not a concern on how it turns out.
 
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All NTR aside... i feel bad for this girl and all equal to her. How she not death. I guess pleasure justifies it for her somehow. And also the fact all males around her just fucker like is nothing. Once lust fades away this shit is grim... and the MC savior complex/gold Fish mindset.

Anyways nice meta commentary about broken people and uncheck levito.
 
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When someone says "#1 manga/doujin", it's subjective due to taste
This shit right here? This shit was honestly my new favorite story right up until the redraw.
I can't even begin to explain how hooked i was since literally Page 1. I saw that facial expression MC had and i immediately started cracking the hell up. The line delivery and depictions are comedy gold to me. And the premise right up to the redraws are honestly such a breath of fresh air. Not everyone in the world is a virgin nor like "i've only been with 3 people". It's like...perfect that it's not typical. I love that she's not just a slut for the sake of it, but the fact that it's how she views friendships. It's her own take. I loved how MC was lowkey goated without even knowing it. It's plays on the whole premise of "the only thing holding me back is ME". The way that even during the first threesome, all he could focus on was Female MC. It was about the passion that he had for her. And it wasn't just him opening up and discovering. She was starting to do things because she knew he would react and try to stop her and take up her time. I...fucking LOVED that. They were beginning to change each other. There's nothing more beautiful than progress/character development.
Let's not forget the side elements that make it as beefy as it is. The way that his friend "onoo" plays such a huge role by being the voice of clear cut reason. Secondly the "point system" that was refered to in female mc's journal, as well as when that brief encounter with the highclass gyaru who was like "i don't smash anyone under 175". Callbacks are chefs kiss when it comes to story. Hell...even the facial expression callbacks with the slight change in dialouge were perfect.
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and then you get to the part where the redraws happen and suddenly "well i REALLY wanted to draw a threesome so i asked my editor/chief" ....like...for what bro? Why does that urge you have suddenly mean that the story takes second priority? Suddenly he's only acting with his dick and the passion for female mc is taking a backseat? Like...why even introduce ANOTHER female "Akito" into it? Wasn't the student council president enough of a "test"? I mean...sure, i get it. It's just a story and it's PROBABLY only really meant to be "fap material". But dam bro idk. When you're invested in something, especially when nothing these days really has anything interesting to hook you, it becomes a massive disappointment when things end up just going typical. I truly and honestly loved the dynamic between MC and Female MC and their development, even at the expense of having to travel through some mild ntr. I say mild, because i feel it was probably needed in order for her to end up comparing who she's sleeping with vs MC's passion for her. idk man..........i'll probably give it a few more chapters. Truly had me hyped in the first half, can't even lie about it. Truly had me hyped.
 

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