Dorei kara no Kitai to Hyouka no sei de Sakushu dekinai no daga - Ch. 12

[MangaDex]

 

[jagfanbb]

The age old proverb: just because you can doesn't mean you should.
Everyone ignore this piece of shit translation and wait for a better one. Save your brain cells.

 

[RogerZero]

Thanks for the translations, my god I love this series so much.

 

[thedinowarrior]

You are NOT from JJK or Chainsaw man

 

[Sionnach91]

They thew him in jail. Horny jail. He's never leaving that one.

 

[ojouihubhjb]

This some shadow garden shit

 

[JoshTheDosh]

The age old proverb: just because you can doesn't mean you should.
Everyone ignore this piece of shit translation and wait for a better one. Save your brain cells.

I thought it was really good I couldn’t notice anything wrong with it

 

[elemint5]

they locked him up
or they are just protecting him from the demon of lust he still a pervert tho

 

[crossface]

I thought it was really good I couldn’t notice anything wrong with it

There's a lot of syntax and grammar errors. It's not a terrible 1st draft but it really needs to be done over to correct for these sorts of things.

Ex:
Page 2
"The balance on this piece of art."
Page 3
"Most of us surprised by how he treat us all"
Ect. Ect.

Personally I do feel this is a snipe, the other group uploads a new chapter once a month and it's been about that time so they might even upload soon. I feel if you want to continue translation for fun and practice then go ahead, but you should get in contact with the team currently working on this to make sure they don't drop it.

 

[Scyllae]

The translation is so inconsistent, it's not unreadable, but i keep correcting the error while reading which make it extremely tedious and kind of ruin the chapter.
Kind of sad, since it's mostly some small error. Taking the whole script through Quillbot would probably solve 90-99% of the issues or just find someone willing to Proofread ( people don't show enough love to proofreading, it's so useful tho ).

 

[gorore]

Personally I do feel this is a snipe, the other group uploads a new chapter once a month and it's been about that time so they might even upload soon. I feel if you want to continue translation for fun and practice then go ahead, but you should get in contact with the team currently working on this to make sure they don't drop it.

100% a snipe, raw came out week and a half ago

 

[cryum]

The problem is I dunno if it's the TL or if MC is actually dumb enough to call a qipao china dress.

 

[Ahmadpo]

Even I have no idea why they put him on house arrest. its been a while

 

[Immortal44]

The translation is so inconsistent, it's not unreadable, but i keep correcting the error while reading which make it extremely tedious and kind of ruin the chapter.
Kind of sad, since it's mostly some small error. Taking the whole script through Quillbot would probably solve 90-99% of the issues or just find someone willing to Proofread ( people don't show enough love to proofreading, it's so useful tho ).

There's a lot of syntax and grammar errors. It's not a terrible 1st draft but it really needs to be done over to correct for these sorts of things.

Ex:
Page 2
"The balance on this piece of art."
Page 3
"Most of us surprised by how he treat us all"
Ect. Ect.

Personally I do feel this is a snipe, the other group uploads a new chapter once a month and it's been about that time so they might even upload soon. I feel if you want to continue translation for fun and practice then go ahead, but you should get in contact with the team currently working on this to make sure they don't drop it.

Y'all are the Goats bro the TL was sooo good I'm really looking forward for more
Thanks for the translation

 

[golden_exp]

oh wow, i guess i put too much attention into erasing those sfx...
also no, i have no meaning to snipe or anything.
if you really hate this, i'll take it to mod and root it out.

sorry.

The problem is I dunno if it's the TL or if MC is actually dumb enough to call a qipao china dress.

also in the raw, he literally said 'チャイナドレス' .

 

[Gatenka]

oh wow, i guess i put too much attention into erasing those sfx...
also no, i have no meaning to snipe or anything.
if you really hate this, i'll take it to mod and root it out.

sorry.



also in the raw, he literally said 'チャイナドレス' .

The translation wasn't too bad, but I agree with other folks here that some proofreading is necessary, as there were grammatical errors all over.

Good for a first try though, if it weren't for what looked like a snipe, I'd probably have encouraged you to continue.

 

[golden_exp]

The translation wasn't too bad, but I agree with other folks here that some proofreading is necessary, as there were grammatical errors all over.

Good for a first try though, if it weren't for what looked like a snipe, I'd probably have encouraged you to continue.

yeah sorry, English is not my native so i guess i should use those grammarly site or something.

 

[mutsutakashi]

From all the knowledges from making cements, games, baking, threading,...

MC is smart isn't it.

His main skill which can correctly measure the sizes of the girl through their clothes is more impressive though.

 

[KuroeNekumi]

Besides the small grammatical errors, the TL was well done. Definitely readable if, as others say, a bit awkward to try and just pass through normally.

Definitely do continue if you want, but do get a proofreader to smooth it over that last bit. Unironically, the best janky TL I've read, if not the least janky, because at least it either only lightly screws up tenses or doesn't put a few particles in, at worst it adds extra (not wrong, but not necessary) words at the end of sentences. Way easier to fix while reading than most.

 

[Nitely]

Thank you Goldennnn