Firstly, already seeing a drastic improvement on typesetting. Good work.
Grammar aside, there are a couple of typos that you could probably fix with an once-over of the chapter, so that would be my advice.
Aaaahhhh. Felmina is still adorable. She even took the cross-dressing in stride. Rather, the readers are probably the only ones who were affected by it at all.
I'm afraid Ash is too wholesome, mature, and adaptable to mentally grow from any of this.
Just a wholesome manga of nice kids being nice.