Fed-Kun's army
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- Jul 31, 2023
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Why do fantasy ‘authors’ always settle for the dumbass system (voice in my head that tells me everything) trope? Does this system have an actual purpose or is it written in because the writer couldn’t come up with a better way for the MC to figure out his abilities. Also why does the ‘Cave King’ have a tame skill? Is it so MC can tame cute animals to slap on the cover books? More slop for the masses I suppose.
Edit: Shockingly, I was right about this being trash.
CH2:
Oh no! Goblins (enemies of humans) have washed up ashore on deaths door. Let’s take them in. Uh oh! They are xenophobic (who could have guessed?) But… What’s this? The princess goblin is ill… And the MC has an all cure stone he pulls out of his ass like it’s god damn Pokémon?!? You’re our savior human!!!
Fan fiction tier writing is better than this crap.
Edit: Shockingly, I was right about this being trash.
CH2:
Oh no! Goblins (enemies of humans) have washed up ashore on deaths door. Let’s take them in. Uh oh! They are xenophobic (who could have guessed?) But… What’s this? The princess goblin is ill… And the MC has an all cure stone he pulls out of his ass like it’s god damn Pokémon?!? You’re our savior human!!!
Fan fiction tier writing is better than this crap.
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