Fight Class 3 - Ch. 84 - Round 84: Contempt for the Weak

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The current state of things could be the result of the authors response to criticism. Before, the mcs role was almost non existent and he was kinda passive.

Right now the focus is solely on the mc and oh boy is he moving things forward. It is fun to watch but the whole aimless mayhem will surely get boring if he remains this way.

Im also not entirely sure what caused the mc to go mad. It does feel like a part of the story is missing.
He got mad because he feels like shit, he literally said that himself. You might think that this is too shallow of a reason but that's what it intended to from the beginning. the MC is gone crazy, and a crazy man don't need any deep and meaningful reason to do things.
 
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@DarkLordAlfie Who knows? It still boggles my mind how sharp a turn this story took.

As a writer, I think the author lost control of his story and he's been free-falling ever since. I know because I've made the same mistake once upon a time because of improper planning. Perhaps the decision to suddenly turn the MC into a murderous psychopath was intended, but the execution was way too rushed in my opinion. The abrupt tone change and the radical shift in the story's narrative is also a major tell that the author's lost the handle on the story.

Multiple major narrative threads have seemingly been dropped and now we've got an underground fighting plot to take center stage? How 'bout you finish the plot threads you started at the beginning of the story first before you jump the shark and start a new tournament and suddenly max out the MC's physique and fighting skills (which was supposed to be a gradual process that he was going to have to earn) eh?
I hope you how realise how much of a thoughtless comment this was
 

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