lol, these onion ninjas are on a roll these days...
Yeah, anyway glad my point about them being 'unintentional assholes' because of lack of knowledge about this stuff was fleshed out properly, I am gonna give this story a solid 8. It started out subpar with whiny characters but later with a strong story and a varying range of characters with their own strengths and quirks. I would love to read more of such stories, ex=specially from this author, I like their art very much.
I fI had to give a suggestion, it would be to tone down the drama a little and give the story a bit more time to develop.