Gal Can't Be Kind to Otaku!? - Vol. 1 Ch. 4 - Otaku & Gyaru & Housecall

[bean_sprugget]

Monologuing is creepy??? What planet are you from sir

I don't think they've internally monologued at all in previous chapters, so it feels very wish-fulfillment-y that we so suddenly and bluntly see them thinking to themselves, "otaku-kun is cool". It's as if they exist only for him; if it's established that the third person narrator has access to their thoughts, how come we didn't see any of them before?

 

[xiaxueyi]

I don't think they've internally monologued at all in previous chapters, so it feels very wish-fulfillment-y that we so suddenly and bluntly see them thinking to themselves, "otaku-kun is cool". It's as if they exist only for him; if it's established that the third person narrator has access to their thoughts, how come we didn't see any of them before?

I guess when you state it like that...maybe not so much of creepy but writing issue idk

tho tbh aren't most of these slice of life wish fulfilment anyways :v the theme also goes well with a Japanese saying "a flower in each hand"

 

[chusetto]

Araaa, both is fine