Gal to Iinchou ga Guuzen Saikai suru Hanashi - Ch. 12

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I think it would be good if the translators, who I get the impression do not speak English as their first language, were to run their translation through a grammar checker or something. There are quite a few places where it's a bit jarring--connective words left out, verbs wrong and so forth.
 
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I thought this started off pretty well, but now I’m struggling to take these adults acting like high school kids seriously with all this over-the-top drama over nothing.
Also, what I don't get is what happened during the school year in this flashback: if the year (seemingly) went on without a problem, why the "classmate reunion" under Reika? Why trying to make the blond MC something like...like a pariah, if on the surface they don't do anything against her?
 
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Somehow it seems the series jumped a few hurdles to get into this point. I think that the two MCs should've had a bit more bonding time for this drama to make sense. Almost feels as if the author has a set amount of chapters to tell the story, so they skipped important fluff, which is vital for romance especially.
 
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So she's always been a bitch, jesus 🥲

And then the audacity of her to go back to Kurosaki, when she's an adult and AGAIN badmouth the class rep, god, hope she'll just get cut out of her life there ain't no redemption for her, considering she's literally always been a manipulative lying B, who kept class rep away from her just, because of fear her bitchery getting exposed
 
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The most charitable explanation is that she felt pressured to go along with the badmouthing and has been terrified ever since of it being revealed by the class rep.

Which still isn't great. But is more 'fear driving unreasonable behavior' and less 'just sort of pointlessly evil'.
 
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Thanks for the translation (and yeah I second running this through some kind of grammar checker. Either that or have more thorough proofreading. Right now it's ok (could definitely be a lot worse), but there are little errors here and there that can easily be caught and corrected).
 
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btw this is just yuri bait (at least based on the raws so far).
Yeah, this isn't yuri at all and it's not romance. Both tags should be dropped. The series is done at chapter 17, so it's not an unknown. It's definitely bait, as there isn't any romance here, and it's definitely not gay. Even the Japanese comments recognized the teasing earlier chapters did, whether they liked it or didn't.
 
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I can't remember whats happening anymore tbh and not sure I want to read it again...
 

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