page 9 : where is the dark elf ? she doesnt want to sky-dive too ?
page 25 , last panel : they are playing rock-paper-scissor to determine which one will get hugged by the ugly , bland MC . magician girl : i should have won after 5 rounds of rock-paper-scissor .
page 26 , panel 5 : a big , old man is hugging and m0lesting a small , young girl who is controlling a big wyvern ? this is so wrong , this should be the other way around : the man should be driving , and the girl should be hugging him .
page 30 : the white elf is innocent , she just wants to damage the dark elf a little , but the spell accidentally cut the string .