page 4 : what is so terrible about pulling out his hairs ? how about pulling out his pub!c hairs instead ? that will be very painful , lol .
page 7 : the japanese soldiers have silence , fast , accurate guns , but they send out the bunny girl with noisy , slow , not-accurate bow ?
page 8 : aiming for their teeth is not a good idea , there is a chance that the arrow will be deflected and wont penetrate .
page 9 : the old man must be thinking : is this a wet dream ? a hot , young girl is sitting on top of me , on my bed , at night . btw , im still a virgin old man .
page 11 : the camel toe on the pants of the young commander , lol .