The line "Now who dared to make my lady cry", while cheesy, has a specific energy to it, which I absolutely love. Perhaps it's the putting the lady you serve before everything part of the message or how it reminds me of chivellry, but I love it. Now if only the the noble lady and her father werent so fixed about commoners, I would love the story even more. To me that's an annoying modern era addition to a story, which is perfect without it. Like I get the notion of trying to establish the noble lady and the ones the MC serves as good people, but it's stupid. You can be a good person even if you arent constantly striving to achieve equality between commoners and nobles. Besides, it's such an absurd and unfitting characteristic of nobles. It's kind of disgusting in my opinion. I mean, because you arent a good enough writer, or are unwilling to do more research, you fall back to the easiest way to signal to readers that a person is good, by saying: "Look, a group of people, which is oppressed! And unlike others, these people want to help them! Isnt that good?" Disgusting. Come up with something original. If I am ever to write a novel or whatever, that exact thing will be used for the opposite. The ones trying to help the commoners will be the bad ones for sure. So annoying, jeesus christ.
Anyway, sorry for getting carried away. isnt the relationship of the lady and the MC just so endearing?!