Gyaru Maid to Akuyaku Reijou ~Ojou-sama no Happy End shika Katan!~ - Ch. 7 - My Sister is the Villainess

[Mauno420]

Almeria:

 

[parodyres]

If anything, Almeria would be ecstatic to have the engagement broken. Just so she can be with Seres lol.

 

[someone2795]

After uploading! I noticed I failed to mention few important thing! Was This readable?
And other when you see names of characters you can notice it is different from before! It was not my plan! I intend to go back and what previous group given the names and use them at last! But I
Do not have more time , today my deployment start ( they pack us like luggage in track, oh god I hate my job , I will be Missing my 20th birthday too) so as I mentioned before 3 individuals offer to proofread, I couldn't even contact them to proofread ! I am sorry! Well it will redone by the new group so no worries actually! Bye for now I will read the comments in night if you can give further information too improve!

I'm from the mangapanda era and this is readable enough! 😂 Don't worry about it too much, you're doing this for free with the little time you had. So thanks for the quick TL!

 

[Rainmoarr]

Much better! Thanks for the TL!

 

[devilpyro]

Oh another poor soul is going to be victim again thanks to serina 🤣

 

[Wouju]

Thank you for the TL! Great improvement from the previous one!

 

[Gu7]

Thank you for your work, stay safe out there !

 

[dude-e]

Many thanks for the work you’ve done!

 

[tremor3258]

Two steps forward, one step back on avoiding bad ends.

 

[tomolone]

Thanks for the 2 chapters TL

 

[jasty]

Thanks! Drastically improved from the last chapter!

 

[RollOmega]

Jilvester is a new one. Reminds me of Jimothy.

 

[scienceygirl]

In case anyone is wondering, my group will be taking over this series! Thanks to RonRay for their work so far and I hope they can continue to improve their skills! Our chapter 6 while be out in a couple days, so please be patient with us as we catch up!

 

[shemper]

Thank you for your work!

 

[N2O]

This is such an improvement from the last one, well done thanks for the TL!

 

[Medicpack]

After uploading! I noticed I failed to mention few important thing! Was This readable?
And other when you see names of characters you can notice it is different from before! It was not my plan! I intend to go back and what previous group given the names and use them at last! But I
Do not have more time , today my deployment start ( they pack us like luggage in track, oh god I hate my job , I will be Missing my 20th birthday too) so as I mentioned before 3 individuals offer to proofread, I couldn't even contact them to proofread ! I am sorry! Well it will redone by the new group so no worries actually! Bye for now I will read the comments in night if you can give further information too improve!

You did good, still a few mistakes a good proofread would sort out easily, like some random capitalization or a few missing words and minor typos, else it's an overall nice improvement.
Good job.

 

[N2O]

I had to come back here to say that I'm very pleasantly surprised to see how this has gone. A lot of the times when there is a bad TL the people on here can get super toxic, but this time there was an outpouring of support and constructive criticism that was well received and resulted in such a substantial improvement in such a short amount of time.

TL should be proud in taking the critiques and some mean comments in stride, taking it as an opportunity to improve and doing it well. So should the people who left the helpful comments detailing what exactly the issues were and how to fix them. GGs all around, stay cool guys

 

[lewdargie]

After uploading! I noticed I failed to mention few important thing! Was This readable?
And other when you see names of characters you can notice it is different from before! It was not my plan! I intend to go back and what previous group given the names and use them at last! But I
Do not have more time , today my deployment start ( they pack us like luggage in track, oh god I hate my job , I will be Missing my 20th birthday too) so as I mentioned before 3 individuals offer to proofread, I couldn't even contact them to proofread ! I am sorry! Well it will redone by the new group so no worries actually! Bye for now I will read the comments in night if you can give further information too improve!

the "!?" in the speechs make them very comedic but i dunno if it's the tone the author wanted to convey, like in her brother's internal monologues he was always "i didn't know she can slime like that!?". It was funny anyways, but are those "!?" in the original too?

 

[758627]

I think we need Estella's reaction cam but then again it just gonna be an ever increasing "I'm tired of this world". And I guess it's time to write off all the capture targets in this "game" as completely useless.

 

[BobDenBeste]

This chapter,despite having some fancy-ness,lacks what you did prior.

It's more soullessness that you see elsewhere.

Well,here's hoping you actually stick to your guns with a fun font style next time and ignore all the people who clearly have skill issues when it comes to reading.

As one of the ones who asked for more readability, it's not about fancy-ness or what not, it's just that (for me at least) when reading on a phone, if you want the entire page to fit, the text shrinks to the point where each letter might not even be a full millimeter in height. And on a second look, that might've been readable enough if it weren't for the text having both a white edge and black vignette while being small. It makes the letters, edge and vignette merge in the same way that many black lines close together with white in-between, when zoomed out turns gray. And this problem is only made worse on phones with low resolution screens. It's not like the fancy stuff will immediately make everything unreadable, I'm actually all for the fancy stuff! But try to read what Estelle says when the image is 16 cm tall. Most of text on the later pages are just fine, if not a bit small, but this is not easy to read when each letter is less than a mm tall, 1,5 mm if you're lucky.

Edit: I'm stoopid . Might've commented under the wrong chapter. I'm actually talking about chapter 6, and the picture's from page 5 of chapter 6, so yea....