Gyaru Maid to Akuyaku Reijou ~Ojou-sama no Happy End shika Katan!~ - Ch. 7 - My Sister is the Villainess

Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 18, 2018
Messages
1,165
Serina doesn't get that she is the reason why her Lady gets -50 affection points as if she was raiding Onyxia badly... and Jil is even her brother. Does Almeria even give a shit about her betrothal any more? Except besides maybe a sense of responsibility?
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 12, 2023
Messages
512
The MC trying to hook up the FML with her fiance, meanwhile the FML just the a girlfriend
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Feb 12, 2023
Messages
1,026
As one of the ones who asked for more readability, it's not about fancy-ness or what not, it's just that (for me at least) when reading on a phone, if you want the entire page to fit, the text shrinks to the point where each letter might not even be a full millimeter in height. And on a second look, that might've been readable enough if it weren't for the text having both a white edge and black vignette while being small. It makes the letters, edge and vignette merge in the same way that many black lines close together with white in-between, when zoomed out turns gray. And this problem is only made worse on phones with low resolution screens. It's not like the fancy stuff will immediately make everything unreadable, I'm actually all for the fancy stuff! But try to read what Estelle says when the image is 16 cm tall. Most of text on the later pages are just fine, if not a bit small, but this is not easy to read when each letter is less than a mm tall, 1,5 mm if you're lucky.

Screenshot_20241018-160450.png
I've adjusted my laptops' zoom back to 100%(from the default suggested 125%),I've adjusted my browser back up to 100%(it was on 90%)I've made the width of the image match that of me smartphone(which does nothing important for me anyway),and aside from whatever the actual resolution of the phone is,it is as close to a phone as I will get.

I can still read it just fine.

And I assume,like the vast majority of phones,that your thumb and pointing fingers can adjust the zoom faster when anyone with a laptop...despite the fact I can actually do that,thanks to the touchpad.

It does have a reasonably higher screen resolution,I think,so it becomes a pay to win issue instead of a skill issue.

But yes,the fancy must stay,more so too the fun colour highlights.
 
Double-page supporter
Joined
Apr 26, 2020
Messages
128
a "proper" group is picking this up that will translate 2 chapters and then just drop it? I'm so glad we have these "proper" groups
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 24, 2023
Messages
506
New font's perfect, thanks for that but it's a shame to see you go though...
 
Fed-Kun's army
Joined
Jul 30, 2024
Messages
78
Oh c'mon.. don't go that route now 😮‍💨

Another GL where the MC wants the target to get with some dude, even if it's not what she personally wants, or if it's something that'd make her unhappy 😮‍💨
I kinda hope it has a twist or something or it doesn’t last too long
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 2, 2018
Messages
1,171
T/N-san what kind of felonies are talking about?

You might not have been fluent in either languages, but your heart was in the right place. Appreciate your hardwork!
Good luck with your work!
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Dec 18, 2023
Messages
644
What about George R. R. Martin? Joffrey, Jaime, Petyr, Jeyne, Alys, Jilvester :)
I feel like you cant have a 3 syllable name and use it as a 3 syllable name in A Son of Ice and Fire. you either get a 2 syllable nickname or a monosyllabic grunt.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Nov 12, 2019
Messages
528
Hey man. This was an incredible step up from the previous chapter!
While I am happy that a bigger group will be picking this up, I would have unironically been happy to see you continue translating this. This chapter was almost effortless to read through thanks to all the improvement you've made with respect to typesetting alone.
I honestly hope you will continue to do scanlations and continue to improve even further! Good luck to you if you decide to stick with it and either way, thank you very much for these two chapter!
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Dec 17, 2018
Messages
1,667
After uploading! I noticed I failed to mention few important thing! Was This readable?
And other when you see names of characters you can notice it is different from before! It was not my plan! I intend to go back and what previous group given the names and use them at last! But I
Do not have more time , today my deployment start ( they pack us like luggage in track, oh god I hate my job , I will be Missing my 20th birthday too) so as I mentioned before 3 individuals offer to proofread, I couldn't even contact them to proofread ! I am sorry! Well it will redone by the new group so no worries actually! Bye for now I will read the comments in night if you can give further information too improve!
Well, there are a few missing spaces but so far, it's readable. The font is ugly but at least it's way better than the previous cursive one. I think the best font to use is one that can be read from your phone (idk what that is but it exists).

Thanks for the update! Appreciate it.
 

PD2

Joined
Mar 18, 2024
Messages
5
Thanks for having picked this up! Its awesome how the criticisms didn't get you down and instead used them to get better.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 18, 2018
Messages
1,165
Noooo Serina don't play matchmaker for a het couple that's a cardinal sin

Thanks for your translation!
It isn't like she won't make everything worse than if she did nothing at all. With how Almeria reacts to anyone who talks to Serina (negatively or positively) it will end in disaster either way.
 
Joined
Oct 20, 2024
Messages
1
After uploading! I noticed I failed to mention few important thing! Was This readable?
And other when you see names of characters you can notice it is different from before! It was not my plan! I intend to go back and what previous group given the names and use them at last! But I
Do not have more time , today my deployment start ( they pack us like luggage in track, oh god I hate my job , I will be Missing my 20th birthday too) so as I mentioned before 3 individuals offer to proofread, I couldn't even contact them to proofread ! I am sorry! Well it will redone by the new group so no worries actually! Bye for now I will read the comments in night if you can give further information too improve!
i actually love your font work. Makes their speech so expressive and gives each character individuality, especially when she goes full gyaru mode. all the best on the deployment and stay safe
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top