Hagure Seirei Ino Shinsatsu Kiroku ~ Seijo Kishi-dan to Iyashi no Kamiwaza ~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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Umm... the plot’s a lil weird and it’s taking a relaxed pace so I wouldn’t be able to tell what kind of story this is without looking at the synopsis or tags. But I like it. There’s a great amount of dialogue, and really shows the character(s) and world’s setting at a nice pace that doesn’t feel too much like an infodump.
 
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@JackApostrophe Mate you can say that when you been planted in front of such majesty and question why you can't peel your eyes up from it then realize they are god's given bounty and should appreciate the sight for as long as possible. Or your a filthy heretic of the flat plains faction and view lowly of our great faith in which you should just be purged via holy flames. The thigh faction and ass factions are currently under consideration.
 
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Plot feels slow, 31 pages and there's almost nothing, he's going somewhere else but even the trip only starts next chapter, most dialogues could be skipped, i really don't get it, author skips 3 years randomly on the first chapter and now we get a lot of overexplained stuff.
 
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Ok. I get it. It is not about seeing someone who can cure anything as useless but someone that can cure anything that cannot fight is. Still...seeing him as useless is wrong if they are surrounded by hostile countries. A soldier that gets up again to fight on is better than one that does not. This is common sense...(heck he doesn't need to be in the frontlines, they can send all of the injured to him to get healed and back to the frying pan of war)of course, knowing manga he will probably get a power up that lets him fight. Like say over-heal (practically cancer) with an absurd speed. Or contious healing for himself like in the other healer manga.
 
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Page 29 "...and how them there's no such thing as..." i think that someone missed "s" at the begining of "show"
 
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I certainly hope the MC won't be a beta pussy and just takes on the girls!

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Maybe he'll get something like Ex Heal that the MC from Pervy Healer has.
 
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Are people really complaining about exposition at the start of a series lol. The art and fanservice design more than makes up for having to deal with the dialogue and I think there was a reasonable balance. It's pretty normal, nothing to be deemed bad or good
 
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I don't mean to sound rude as I appreciate the work your group has been doing a lot but that one colored and redrew panel is kinda off-putting. The raws look way better on that panel.
 
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the headmaster first appereance look like character from saimin senshidou XD
 
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Thats a damn slow chapter considering they spent it all talking and even then failed to establish much of the world.
 

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