Henkyou Mob Kizoku no Uchi ni Totsuidekita Akuyaku Reijou ga, Mechakucha Dekiru Yoi Yome Nanda ga? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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god i love crippled women. there need to be more manga with crippled love interests!:win:
 
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Checked the comments and didn't see anything so some feedback.

Pg. 13
"Should I put an end to it?"
This doesn't make sense in the context of the conversation, "Should I put and end to them?" would fit better as he's talking about the fiancé's families who didn't show for the funeral and felt relieved about his brother's deaths.

"Oh that's unacceptable young master. You're thinking of killing it off aren't you?" again, doesn't make sense in the context off the conversation, "You're thinking of killing them off, aren't you?" fits better.

I'll post more if I see anything, thanks for translating.
 
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looks decent, hopefully it doesn't get any love triangle or even a harem
 
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This is quite good, but I don't like the forced "twisted world" fate thing. Would be preferred if the villainess is a true bitch who turn over a new leaf (haven't found this kind of manga since the hiatus reincarnated butler).
"I swear I won't bother you again "
 
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The 4 Isekai suggestions here are incredible. This format i only had read Saitou-san.

Thanks
 
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Interesting. Maybe it’s just me but it seems that the burn scar isn’t part of the game. This means that things have changed in the real world compared to the game.

Is someone at the Academy also a reincarnator?
 
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nice face splotch
I think it's funny that they treat scars as if they ruined the face when the artwork only shows a blemish on the face, I remember Todoroki in My Hero Academia who only has a little red spot that doesn't affect his prince face at all while in Avatar we have a better representation of a real scar on Zuko where it doesn't just blemish his face, it makes the side of the scar always have a more closed eye, it even looks swollen which actually changes his appearance, it looks like a real scar not a scar make-up like in these works.
 
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for real
I don't really mind tho. A "scar" that just makes her cuter is, well, cute. I can just attribute it to the art style. It's enough to get the narrative point across.
 
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i find this isekai otome game thing unnecessary, the premise works completely fine without it, but that's the trend right now i guess
 
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ooh so this is after the game is over for a change. Good!


aaaaan I take that back. Should have read the whole chapter before saying anything huh..... gods bloody damnit
 
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it is always nice when the villainess become the heroine, they are always more interesting in many ways
 
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It's me or it's always the same plot ? Even the isekai genra have more originality. Can't they do without reincarantion and/or the all mighty "otome game setup" ????!!!

It doesnt means they will be good without them, but, i just wants some change. I click on it by random (didnt read the description before)
 

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