Henkyou Mob Kizoku no Uchi ni Totsuidekita Akuyaku Reijou ga, Mechakucha Dekiru Yoi Yome Nanda ga? - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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Checked the comments and didn't see anything so some feedback.

Pg. 13
"Should I put an end to it?"
This doesn't make sense in the context of the conversation, "Should I put and end to them?" would fit better as he's talking about the fiancé's families who didn't show for the funeral and felt relieved about his brother's deaths.

"Oh that's unacceptable young master. You're thinking of killing it off aren't you?" again, doesn't make sense in the context off the conversation, "You're thinking of killing them off, aren't you?" fits better.

I'll post more if I see anything, thanks for translating.
 
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This is quite good, but I don't like the forced "twisted world" fate thing. Would be preferred if the villainess is a true bitch who turn over a new leaf (haven't found this kind of manga since the hiatus reincarnated butler).
"I swear I won't bother you again "
 
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Interesting. Maybe it’s just me but it seems that the burn scar isn’t part of the game. This means that things have changed in the real world compared to the game.

Is someone at the Academy also a reincarnator?
 

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