Mmmmm I quite like the setup amd characters, but something about the omnipresent chat isn't doing it for me.
I think it's the way they talk, it's all just kinda generic npc lines ig. I just wish the chat had more character. Still a decent start, but some of the chat lines make me cringe a bit.
Probably like a 7 after the first 5 chapters, could easily move up or down though, 5 chapters isn't a lot to go off of.