Hiota no Kanojo ga Ore no Motteru Eroge ni Kyoumi Shinshin Nanda ga...... - Vol. 5 Ch. 27

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Honestly, Ruri does not add anything positive to the story. She's there only to stall the development, because the writer is not good enough to do so convincingly. She is also necessary, because with how the two characters are (especially the fmc) they would've progressed far quicker.

So the author wants to have a cake and eat it too, a character that tries to progress (FMC) while also not allowing the story to progress, because it would require skill to then come up with something compelling for after that progress has happened.
And that is territory that is much less traveled, so you got fewer tropes you can shamelessly copy-paste...
 
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Does the author actually want to make us hate Ruri? Because if so, they're succeeding. She went there uninvited and just decided to screw up everything for them. Oh, you're against the mixed bathing? Great! Feel free to fuck off.
And what the hell was MC worried about? Misaki pretty much told him that she wanted to share a room with him.

Honestly, Ruri does not add anything positive to the story. She's there only to stall the development, because the writer is not good enough to do so convincingly. She is also necessary, because with how the two characters are (especially the fmc) they would've progressed far quicker.

So the author wants to have a cake and eat it too, a character that tries to progress (FMC) while also not allowing the story to progress, because it would require skill to then come up with something compelling for after that progress has happened.
And that is territory that is much less traveled, so you got fewer tropes you can shamelessly copy-paste...
This, every time I see a walking distraction/delay character I can already tell that the writer is mediocre AT BEST. And they always try to disguise it with some utterly pathetic comedy, which always fails anyway.
 
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