Home Center-goto Yobidasareta Watashi no Daimeikyuu Renovation! - Ch. 7.2 - At Last, To the Surface! (Part 2)

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Will the animals be ok if mc is gone a long time? Maybe pochi and tama respawn if they die :wtf:
 
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...wait but how did Maho get in front of Fiona? With a sign? After doing all that stuff messing with the teleporter?
 
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OH GOD THE SYMPTOMS OF SUDDENLY REMEMBER EVERYTHING AS YOU READ IT AAAAAAAHHHHH
ITS ALL COMING AT ONCE
so that's what happened, interesting aight

Figured they would be foolish enough to split them up
And now I sense a new arc on the horizon, risky considering we may be stepping away from creatively killing floors with unlimited reasources and science
But I'm on board all the same...

Have a nice day
 

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So you would rather have like 1-2 arcs of them being seperated?
no. but a deus ex machina solution is nearly always the worst.
the author could have easily written a solo chapter in which Maho then finds an escape item of some sort, which enables her to flee the dungeon and activate the first floor teleport stone.
then later when Fiona returns to the dungeon Maho would be waiting for her on the surface basically.

this is just an example I thought of in like 5 seconds, so there are probably better versions, but the authors version "lol she can use all the teleport stones because isekai lol" is certainly a lot worse.
 

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