Seems that you misinterpreted that I said this particular LN was badly written. To clarify, I meant all LNs I've read are seem poorly written and I have not read this LN nor do I intend to because my past experiences.
It cannot be just because the LNs are poorly MTL translations since official published LNs have the same flaws. That example I brought up was from goblin slayer vol 1. Since have enjoyed both the manga and anime of goblin slayer, I can only conclude that LN are just functionally script drafts. Even fan fiction the script format is considered to be a unacceptable standard, so why should I tolerate a published work that expects you pay for it to have it in all but in name?