Thanks for the chapter and translation!
Just a note, you're missing an awful lot of "S" in a lot of words, such as "Friends"
While the word "friend" is obviously correct, it should include a final S if it doesn't have an "A" or a possessive pronoun (though not always for possessives) preceding the word:
- He is a friend (when talking about person X and Y)
- We are friends (Also when talking about person X and Y, but also used with several people at once)
- He and I are friends
- He is my friend
- He is your friend
- He is our friend
- They are my friends (in this case, there are several people, so the S is required)
I also noticed this in a couple of other words, though friends appears a lot in the chapter.