Imasara desu ga, Osananajimi wo Suki ni Natte Shimaimashita - Ch. 34 - Unforgivable Person

[kiero13]

I- I dont mind if we get another twist towards yuri route lol

 

[darkrider999999999]

Did the author change the FMC?

 

[VINT64]

The boy she thought she knew became a man recently

 

[Folt]

So, Hilarious starts to notice the guy because he "shows a different side of himself"

And that happen because of Yami

Which he and Yami bonded, because he is chasing after Hikari by trying to get into the same school and failed

Man, that sure is a love triangle

Certified guaranteed love drama irony at it's finest.

 

[DementisXYZ]

How... how did last chapter resolve?! That's a big deal to not show us what happened.

 

[ipmanvsthemask]

Setsuna best girl though

She is, indeed.

 

[FightingBread]

ts st pmo icl

 

[ninolover69]

anyone know how this ends

hikari and ayami get married, yuu bakes their wedding cake

 

[Grishnag]

it was just a prank bro

 

[essensue]

So she's just the main character for the rest of the manga right?

It's really hard to have a drama featuring a character like Ayami and not have it seem like she's a main character, because the girl is Drama.

I don't think the story is meant to be enjoyed as an invested competition between them over who wins the boy or is 'best girl' or whatever, so much as how the three of them interact and shape each other and how that dynamic changes as things play out.

 

[CheTachibana]

So the obvious thing happens.

So why did we have the first 21 chapters start the series? So we could know exactly what was going to happen ahead of time and be disappointed in how we got there?

There is no suspense, there is bad character development, and whichever character isn't present in the current arc we care less and less about them.

It just feels like this is a lesson in how not write a story properly.

The mistake here is the perspective not the story, this story makes much more sense as a light novel than a manga. Making the story a flashback while risky, I don't think is its biggest flaw. The way the story is cut, positioned and presented is where it lacks, but that's my optimism that later on the climax and resolve would make sense. Maybe if that chapter where Hikari saw Yama kiss the male deutegonist would have been better to be a first, then the whole development background behind them, and then involve these interactions between them two, AND after that the first 20 chapters, this would have been better.