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The author has identity crisis. You cannot write this unless you experienced this LOTSA times.back to his white album 2 days
Rejoicing it reached 6. I wonder if MC would like crying segs.
The author has identity crisis. You cannot write this unless you experienced this LOTSA times.back to his white album 2 days
I’m honestly into it. I feel for the girl and all she’s going through with school, stepdad, and her little “side hustle.” I really wish she could be happy too.Damn, this took a totally different route.
People didn’t like how the guy was kissing the female protagonist’s best friend and review bombed it. Story is taking an interesting turn. I for one am curious about how this’ll play out.Huh?, i left this like in the third chapter, because i wanted to see more chapter at once, but how did the rank dropped that much?
Correct, I actually think the story has potential but the pacing and release schedule has completely ruined it. 96 pages to get to that twist but those 96 pages almost took 9 months to release. So you had people bought into something for almost a year and then flipped the script with extremely bad foreshadowing.what a way to ruin things, should be used as a case study on what not to do when writing a story