Kekkon shiyou. Rikon zentei de. - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I really enjoyed this. Let's see how this goes.

Thank you for the translation (Rui is so attractive. If she quit smoking she'd be near perfect).
 
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Bro could've used the "sorry my wife came down with a 36.9°C fever so I had to take care of her" line as an excuse.
 
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Him hissing at the Roomba was tremendous. lol

I shall be watching this one with great interest.
 
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Some of the mentality here is kinda annoying. "why would she date a loser like me? " ; "she's my only friend and even after high school we've made a point to hang out every now and then."

I mean heck, she's who you went to after your parents kicked you out. You're clearly at least close friends. You don't need to have romance on the mind, but it's just rude to assume someone like that sees you as a loser. On the other hand the female lead seems WAAAY too detached socially and from reality. I'm actually going to backtrack a little and ask, why are they friends? She doesn't seem the type that would have friends period. Like just realistically the ML seems way too passive and insecure to have asked her to hang out (there's a flashback of them in someone's bedroom playing video games; no way he invited her over with this personality). The FL just seems too apathetic to care. I mean granted we haven't gotten her POV so maybe she just has a cold demeanor but has always seen the ML has a great friend? The ending at least hints at that. Still I have to wonder how they ever became close friends.


This. So much this. I feel like the author just wanted an excuse and didn't care, but this so far pokes so many holes. As it's usually depicted, being a NEET isn't just being jobless (rather you could have a job), it's being a shut-in and barely going outside period. It seems attached to extreme social anxiety or some type of trauma or fear or something. Here the ML has no problem engaging socially. He got an interview for a part time the day after he got kicked out (or within a few days of it depending on how time passed) and he talked about getting a full time job in 100 days like it's not too stressful for him. It also didn't seem like he has something in his job history or lacks certain credentials (like a HS diploma). We also saw him get stressed about being useless and it was revealed he's used to cooking and doing other chores daily, so it's not like he wasn't pulling his own weight at home. So like wtf? Why did his mom actually kick him out? Was he laid off and she just wasn't having it? Is he actually a bum at home who didn't try for a job until he got kicked out? Literally either his family's awful or we break the character established in chapter one.

Though I guess the premise isn't popping back up again. Personally I feel like as a starting chapter to establish the series this is kinda rough and full of plot holes, but the ending pages suggest a fine series moving forward. God they both need so much character development too. Like how the hell did these people graduate high school with personalities this undeveloped?
Being mentally fucked is probably the reason. I had a time when I was a full on neet but I was still able to pretend socialize enough so that people won't notice. I could fake being outgoing for a small period of time but I couldn't hold a job/ talk to people a lot/ leave the house.
I lost everyone I know and if it wasn't for my family I would of stayed Neet loser my entire life.
 
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Marriage Speedrun any%

It is straight up ToniKawa again with less fluff.
 
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Bro could've used the "sorry my wife came down with a 36.9°C fever so I had to take care of her" line as an excuse.
Yeah, was about to say that as well.
Probably not a good enough excuse for now. That'll sound merely “I swear she's like my wife for me, man! — we even had a real wedding!” until they submit their marriage application and make it official.

On the other hand, perhaps a mere “I am sorry, but my friend came down with a 36.9°C fever, so I had to take care of her” would suffice and the husband just wouldn't try that excuse when a manager was already “so mad at him for being late” and thus the excuse might have felt just hopeless. Also NEET are not particularly known for their social skills, and that includes using good excuses confidently.
 
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Probably not a good enough excuse for now. That'll sound merely “I swear she's like my wife for me, man! — we even had a real wedding!” until they submit their marriage application and make it official.

On the other hand, perhaps a mere “I am sorry, but my friend came down with a 36.9°C fever, so I had to take care of her” would suffice and the husband just wouldn't try that excuse when a manager was already “so mad at him for being late” and thus the excuse might have felt just hopeless. Also NEET are not particularly known for their social skills, and that includes using good excuses confidently.

It's an interview, they're not gonna care that you're not legally married.

If anything it shows that you're a normal, well-adjusted adult with proper priorities. That's still your fiance that you live with, any normal human being would understand that you put her health and well-being first.
 
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Her: "I never thought that having someone else to rely on in the house, could be so reassuring."

Me: starts singing
"Two people, together forever
Security in life and someone to love ya
Instead of being all alone
Such a lonely existence, I'd kill myself."
-From Bob's Burgers
 
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Interesting premises with nice fluff. A emotional male mc with a stoic fmc. Lets see where it goes
 

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