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I honestly kind of like this story progression because if the author wants to keep writing the story in the train then he needs to do a slow progression because if they get together the train story ends
When them getting to know each others names feels like it's the peak, you know it's good writing.So axe in two, three chapters? This is what happens when you peak too early as an author.
Yeah they know their name, they finally talked, now they can start conversation the next time saying thanks and going from thereBut is this really progress?
But is this really progress?
dogTough chapter to work. We hope y'all like it as much as we do!
I'll use that as an excuse for when a relationship of mine sours "My ship lacked support"Takes a village to raise a child.
Takes a train to ship a couple.
They're just joking, maybe, considering a lot of series 'end' with a kiss and such tho there needs to be more stories where they get together halfway so we can see their dates if not at the 'beginning' like "You and I are Polar Opposites" , raws are up to chapter 12 tho so other than some early cancellation idk if it would unless it's beaten by whatever's published on their siteConfirmed or not ?
It's prolly a bigger deal when ur late for school/miss your stop tho versus it being a weekend, my parents would've killed me for skipping school at that age even if it was by 'accident' (not that we have a train system in my state lol) but other than her being able to 'pickup on it' like that guy's friend, maybe she'll tell her about the crush and they'll have an opportunity to be a wing(wo)manAll hands on deck to protect their time together!
But damn you, friend-chan! She could have been stuck at the station with him!
But is this really progress?