Kimi ga Hoeru Tame no Uta wo, - Vol. 4 Ch. 17 - The One Beside Her Should Be...

[Niewaznekto]

Gotta say, as much as I enjoy the dynamic of the main two, a lot of the surrounding characters and plots in this manga are really tired and kind of reek of melodrama in the worst way. Especially obvious in this chapter where about the most predictable interaction between Haru and Yuu's sister happens. It's just not all that interesting when you can see what is going to happen from a mile off.

The tropes would be fine if theu had room to breathe... but instead it feels like a speedrun of a generic plot outline. In general, this plotline would work better as year 2 thing, with them forming band year 1 and gettibg to knowbeach other and year 3 being going pro or sth

 

[AxionBlackwell]

oh shit. toxic mom + siscon

 

[Suciiptoo]

wouldn't haru get sick too?

 

[Khoopa]

Sister is currently being quite lame.
Anyways, she can't shit talk on the person her sister chose for herself who is going to be her future sister-in-law.
Go Haru! Go and prove yourself even if you know your weaknesses!

 

[njm380]

the drama is kinda lame and silly but haru and yuu are sooo cute i can deal with it... im a sucker for fever delirium yuri

Lmfao same. Sister really pisses me off and the drama all together honestly is pretty bland... But that's fine. I convince myself it's fine so long as I can see Haru and Yuuri together.

Kashikaze!! The wholesomeness and couple dynamic is there... But I hope you also spice things up a bit! I want the plot to test their bond and flip that middle finger towards that bitch sister and deadbeat mum!

 

[foxxreader66]

Yup knew that sister was going to be a jerk. Shouldn’t have left her all alone then. You had your shot but you disappeared on her and now Haru is here with Yuu and they will have a relationship other than sisters