Konbini Goutou kara Tasuketa Jimi Tenin ga, Onaji Kurasu no Ubu de Kawaii Gyaru datta - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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I'm used to reading shitty manga, but this isn't even the entertaining kind of shitty
 
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This shit is a fucking mess and is some of the most cornball writing I’ve ever read. Not gonna stop reading tho I wanna see where this dumpster fire goes.
 
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Mc: Time to die.
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Mc: Ok, maybe later.

Even this twist would be better than what we were served.
 
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This is an amazingly scatterbrained story, based even on just a single chapter. I feel like the author's bike is missing a few gears.
 
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–I'm going to kms.
–What? Why?
–Because I have a tragic story.
–Oh... Ok... But actually don't.
–Ok.
–Wait what?
–I won't.
–Oh... But what about your tragedy?
–What tragedy? A cute girl asked me so I won't do that.
–Oh... Wanna live together?
–HELL YEAH!
 
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So her parents was the one who was driving the vehicle that killed his family and then her parents hang themself because of that accident? (Page 28)
 
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It feels like the pacing is kinda insane. He was firmly suicidal going into the conveni and drove a robber away with his resolve, but at the drop of a hat he's suddenly completely fine after hearing a girl from school telling him to live...? I can't tell if this is trying to be dark or light-hearted by how it casually mixes everything in a way that gives tonal whiplash. Pg. 28 depicts in one panel implied accidental homicide followed by double suicide.

And don't get me started with how the childhood friend treats her rejection of him like nothing happened.

There's a lot that feels off with this and the writing quality feels dubious, but it's also not boring. I actually wanna see where this goes even with this inconsistent, sometimes illogical and even insane way that things unfold.
 
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What do you mean she dumped you...she rejected you..and you chose suicide and then changed your mind cause another cute girl said not to.

This isn't event a trash fire..but I can't call it a dumpster fire yet either.
 
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This feels like I dream I would have while sleeping pissed cause i got camped botlane the game before I went to bed
 
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I'm trying to imagine writing this. Either the author is one bad day away from incel rage or he was laughing his ass off writing the most cringe thing he could think of
 
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ah yeah, this is that shitty manga that I didn't read back then...
guess i'll read it today out of boredom :p
 

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