Same with "Lord Iris"Proofreader missed one here.
Same with "Lord Iris"Proofreader missed one here.
But not sure if it will come. If he asked now what the longest cold sleep time is...I totally thought they’d
“This is the cryo sleep capsule”
100 years later
”Welcome back, Sir Alan. I’m your great-grandchild, and we’re waging war with the bug”
ends
Glad it wasn’t like that and hope it stays that way for the time being.
they just don't give a shit.Proofreader missed one here.
It was just a minor thing that allowed alien dogs to run faster, they weren't casting fireballs and whatnot.One thing I’m wondering about the translation is how Iris mentioned Magic as a technological system unknown to the Empire.
It’s not entirely unknown, since way back in Chapter 6, nanom said that the Empire had found magic and developed a sensor to detect it.
The plan isn’t to fight off a full fleet of Bugs, it’s to be able to build a reactor that can power a communication system that can call the Empire for help, and hold back a Bug scout force long enough for the Navy to arrive.The whole idea of facing off bugs with a planet from the medieval period is absurd, even if you had time to accelerate their tech. If it was so easy to repel a bug invasion, why are their frontier planets constantly in danger of being destroyed?
If "just build a planetary defense network using your own strength" is good enough for Alan, its good enough for the rest of humanity?
I think the reason for the change of pacing is more of the mangaka having to freeball the story since the original author just up & quit. Dude’s probably doing the best he can since he didn’t have a whole plot planned out.It's too bad everything goes really fast, but I guess the end is near.
Would have been nice to have longer/more proper "ending" to see him take over the world and then do changes, same with the "explanations" to Cleria about his origin because 2-3 panels of memory viewing felt meh to me. I was expecting him to use some sort of VR to showcase stuff and with some more explanation both for her (and us with some more details) about the empire. Like going to places and him explaining. They are limited in time/ideas (both in lore and IRL) but still...
There was potential but sadly the execution couldn't follow it I guess. Not saying it's bad, I enjoyed what I read until now, at least most of it. The poison + cancer feels a bit "out of nowhere", or at least forced/fast, we'll see what they do for MC and how everything else does too. No sure if I fully like to design of the mech suit/armor, not the worst I've seen but could be better looking to me, at least it's somewhat unique.
Yeah, I know, that's why I don't want to push all the issues on him. It's just too bad he couldn't develop it a bit more for it to flow better. I don't remember if there was one, but they could have gone on hiatus for some time to think it through, but I guess if it was planned to end or the author only adapt and doesn't do any writings, then that was already a wrap I guess.I think the reason for the change of pacing is more of the mangaka having to freeball the story since the original author just up & quit. Dude’s probably doing the best he can since he didn’t have a whole plot planned out.
Agreed. If he’d had more time to plan things out I think he’d have done a better job. To be fair though, I’ve read a lot of series where the story isn’t even this good with pacing or planning so I’ll give him some props for that.Yeah, I know, that's why I don't want to push all the issues on him. It's just too bad he couldn't develop it a bit more for it to flow better. I don't remember if there was one, but they could have gone on hiatus for some time to think it through, but I guess if it was planned to end or the author only adapt and doesn't do any writings, then that was already a wrap I guess.