Kuromaku Ikka ni Tensei Shita Kedo Gensaku Mushishite Dokuritsu Suru - Ch. 2 - Gaining Allies and Becoming Independent

[Yukito00]

FTR, I think that, when you're comparing translations, you should also post a screenshot of the original Japanese version. Otherwise it becomes too much "we're right, they're wrong; trust us".

Here's another slipup. In the previous page, Phi said, "I bet there are countless people who'd do anything to work for the Lughsouth family...".
But Mr. MTL Maou's translation made no sense.

"Unlike a clumsy beastman like Fii,// You're a normal human..."
That's an obvious mistranslation, 'cause Phi was talking about herself.
Phi was being self-deprecating, saying how normal and capable people should work for the Lughsouth Family, not a clumsy beastfolk girl like her. And here's the raws page to drive my point home. Not to mention that 「普通の人」(normal people/person) got mistranslated here. 人 (person or "hito" in Japanese) rarely ever gets translated to "human being". The word that is usually used for human/s in Japanese is 「人間」(human being/s or "ningen" in Japanese. I am 100 per cent sure that even you, with just your anime knowledge, knows that "ningen" is the word for human being in Japanese... Regardless, I could go on and on about this, but that "Ailruld" slipup should settle this matter. That's a dead giveaway that he uses MTL and doesn't know Japanese at all.

 

[Yukito00]

FTR, I think that, when you're comparing translations, you should also post a screenshot of the original Japanese version. Otherwise it becomes too much "we're right, they're wrong; trust us".

Here's another slipup I noticed in the last page I posted. You have the word 「猜疑心」(suspicious nature). Here it is shown in a Japanese dictionary:

But, unfortunately for Mr. MTL Maou, it got mistranslated as "hunting spirit" as shown below:

Here's the raws page so you could confirm that it's the same word I've just mentioned.

 

[HiByeisme]

I find it really frustrating in these types of stories how fixated the MC is on avoiding the main story. Sure, if you “avoid the Hero like the plague” you won’t be killed for betraying the hero… but at the same time, the original MC was killed for being a villain and betraying the MC. As long as he doesn’t act exactly like the original MC and try to harm the Hero’s party, which he won’t since he is a different person, he’ll be fine. There’s no need to go out of his way to avoid the Hero, in fact it could even be beneficial to interact with the hero to some degree. It would be different if the original MC had already publicly done terrible things, and the Hero is out to get him, but that’s not the case. Then again, in this particular scenario it might be best to avoid the Saintess if at all possible… she seems like someone who will try to drag him into unwanted trouble.

 

[twilighttempest]

She is warming up to him too quickly.

 

[CrimsonNanashi]

I find it really frustrating in these types of stories how fixated the MC is on avoiding the main story. Sure, if you “avoid the Hero like the plague” you won’t be killed for betraying the hero… but at the same time, the original MC was killed for being a villain and betraying the MC. As long as he doesn’t act exactly like the original MC and try to harm the Hero’s party, which he won’t since he is a different person, he’ll be fine. There’s no need to go out of his way to avoid the Hero, in fact it could even be beneficial to interact with the hero to some degree. It would be different if the original MC had already publicly done terrible things, and the Hero is out to get him, but that’s not the case. Then again, in this particular scenario it might be best to avoid the Saintess if at all possible… she seems like someone who will try to drag him into unwanted trouble.

i mean tbf there are plenty of manga in this genre where there's a plot force that makes it so the events of the story happen no matter what the MC does to change things. If i was him id be running for the hills avoiding TF out of the story until i knew if the story i was in had that forced plot correction in place or not.

 

[madeinSergei]

sharing some more and theres stiil many like this
{ Left- Ours / Right - Mr. Maou's}

thx for calling people out who do this.
Also, i realized from the explanation that you missed a word "to" in this phrase.

 

[BigPoppaEffy]

Ew, I don't like her eyes. For some reason they creep me out lol 👀

 

[banzaidrop]

Hair dryer LMAO

 

[OliveOilOilOil]

A beast girl and a saint joining almost immediately at the beginning…I wonder where did I hear something very similar from

 

[Dicrel]

Hmm, it's a testament to how bad Phi's life was prior to meeting the MC that just being treated decently secures her loyalty. I am curious if the MC will train her to become a bodyguard/assassin. If the MC is going to go up against his family, he better understand somebody's hands are going to get dirty.

With how the Saintess is, and that talk about the MC possibly being one of the prophecied ones, yeah, I'd stay away too. It looks like if the MC has any potential, the Saintess will take that as a sign to mold/groom him into one of the heroes. And considering she's giving off yandere vibes, it would probably be best to stay out of her clutches.

 

[Basic_human]

The art is very good

This will take VERY VERY VERY long untill the plot developed

 

[Basic_human]

I find it really frustrating in these types of stories how fixated the MC is on avoiding the main story. Sure, if you “avoid the Hero like the plague” you won’t be killed for betraying the hero… but at the same time, the original MC was killed for being a villain and betraying the MC. As long as he doesn’t act exactly like the original MC and try to harm the Hero’s party, which he won’t since he is a different person, he’ll be fine. There’s no need to go out of his way to avoid the Hero, in fact it could even be beneficial to interact with the hero to some degree. It would be different if the original MC had already publicly done terrible things, and the Hero is out to get him, but that’s not the case. Then again, in this particular scenario it might be best to avoid the Saintess if at all possible… she seems like someone who will try to drag him into unwanted trouble.

Probably the family play role here, we're he approaches hero carelessly his father could see it as act of betrayal and trying to dispose him.

 

[Ernergeycey]

Oh, great, another protagonist who's too much of a cretin to notice that literally all they have to do to prevent their downfall is… not behave like the original. In that case, all he has to do is not betray the Hero party. That's it. Problem solved.

yo bro
what is the manga from your pfp?

 

[ShinduPK4]

yo bro
what is the manga from your pfp?

Gokusotsu Kraken (Hell's Tormentor Kraken)

 

[jonsmth]

A beast girl and a saint joining almost immediately at the beginning…I wonder where did I hear something very similar from

Is it the healer who shoots beams made of cows

 

[Ernergeycey]

Gokusotsu Kraken (Hell's Tormentor Kraken)

thank you

 

[sperance]

Probably the family play role here, we're he approaches hero carelessly his father could see it as act of betrayal and trying to dispose him.

In addition to that, chapter 1 told us the entire family except the little sister got executed for treason. If Yuri simply does nothing, he'll be considered an accomplice to their treason and killed as well.

But if he gets banished to some backwater and then does a good job managing it and flying under tha radar, when the plot kills his treacherous family he can honestly and truthfully say he had nothing to do with it.

 

[Natoto]

Well if the guy joins the party can't he just...not betray the protagonist?

 

[sanctuary]

Cook them Yukito!

 

[Firemorfox]

"Somehow i heard that some rando noble rescued a single slave in this remote town"
"i must now make him my husband!"

What?

Probably not that simple and is more likely an excuse. The Saint seems to either have foreknowledge, be a reincarnator, OR had a divine revelation about Yuri being a transmigrator. Considering the Saint is known to act weirdly according to the attendant.