Dang, bro really camped the release just to get his version out first, huh? Yeah, this is totally about love for the series and quality... surely it is.
Why is the author skipping over time all the time? Every chapter has months between them. I can't even imagine Hebikawa's Mom's bf now getting involved anymore since it's been months since he last met her. Shizuki barely seems to have much interaction with the girls.